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| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] | | Pages (10): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: killercandycane On: February 04, 2013 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I never understood how it was kagomes fault. she can have sex with sesshomaru all she wants, and not have to tell anyone, it really isn't their business seeing as inuyasha goes for dead women. but i do understand why you wrote this way, its just in kagome's nature to blame herself for everything. this isn't a flame by the way :3 | Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read it before and I'll probably read it again. A much desired and well written sequel. A fine balance of angst and passion.
| Title: The Ending
Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you make a sequel to this sequel? Please? You should..! Overall, I loved this one...! Just enough lemon, but not too much, just enough comedy, just enough everything else... Like the perfect soup. I hope to read all of your other SesshxKag fics soon... You're style is fantastic... If you have time to answer my previous and current questions, you can message me on fanfiction, I'm Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka. At the End of the End, loose ends are met, joined as one in harmony. When it is done, the wind is passed, the ever ending story.
| Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 9: Sorry. I've never been on this site previous to this fic, so I didn't realize it didn't say what chap the person commentee on... Whoops... Anyways... "The epitome of the gentle giant, the hanyou Jinengi had a long, equine face and bulbous, yellow eyes that shone with an innate kindness and a quiet despondency." My response to that; What?! You use too many complex words! The average person doesn't have as wide a vocabulary as a writer! lol! Heh heh... I loved that ep... Kagome finally realized (ish) that Inu loves Kik, not her... :D I really got into this chap... And laughed numerous times... I had a lot more to say, but I'm babysitting and she (my sister, whom I'm babysitting) wasn't listening, so I had to go down and talk to her, etc. and forgot what I was planning on saying... Damn little sister... *growls* Well... Until the End of the End, my Friend...
| Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The... The... Poor Kagome!!! That's really gotta suck...! Did Kagome ever put her skirt + panties back on? lol! Uhmm... Well... This chapter was... laughable... I'm not good with reviews, but it was really good! :DD Umm... I liked that Shippou's all thinking she's going to have sex when she really does want to take a bath... Haha... :D I hate how stupid Kagome is though... I would have known from his stripes and only ever feeling one arm at a time... No offense, but she's a major baka... Until the End of the End, my Friend..
| Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmfaoo!!! Poor, poor Kagome.. I hate it when I can't remember something important! lol!!! That punishment... I would go insane! That's torture!!!! Ughh!!! *growls at Kagome's lover aka SesshoMaru* :D I like this one better, as I said before... It's more in-depth, and the spelling/grammar is perfect, which means I don't have to translate! WOOHOO!!! The only problem I have with this site, is that you never get the first letter of the first word of every line... It's kind of irritating... Otherwise it's perfect... Until the End of the End, my Friend...
| Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one much better, as it's miore... in depth... Haha...! I really like this chap... That's how I would be... "She was fully aware that she was bribing a child with sweets to have alone time with her lover" I think that's what it was... I'm going by memory here... :D Unti the End of the End, my Friend...
| Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: napris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooey, I definitely like this system of reviewing over FF.net's because it's a lot easier to convey stuff over. I made an account just for this story of yours, btw. Anyhow, your story was very interesting and erotic, kicking off from your oneshot. =D I totally caught onto the Eros and Psyche outline around before she saw his face with the penlight. Neat trick, btw, using my (probably?) FAVORITE myth ever. :D Style of writing was only a six because it's not terrible, but instead, very average. Style doesn't really matter much in an erotic fic like this, so don't worry about it. =/ I like your story well enough without any special effects. Spelling&Grammar was pretty good. I don't remember every sp/gr mistake, but it didn't frustrate me at all reading your fiction. Originality/Creativity; I don't care how many times people make fun of the cliched SesshoumaruxKagome plots. The mate thing, the spontaneous attraction, hell, the sex. I love it all. Can't get enough of it. And again, I love the Psyche thing you did. Enjoyment factor: I don't think I read this story all the way through just for the sex scenes. I really wanted to find out if Kagome was going to betray her mysterious lover by seeing him, and I wanted to see her reaction to Sesshoumaru's identity. However, all the scenes with Naraku pained me to read because Kagome had to sacrifice her honesty and loyalty. Eek. The story was interesting. :D I loved how you wrote Sesshoumaru as "distressed" because she found out it was him. The romantic in me immediately pounced on that and thought "HE DOESN'T WANT HER TO LEEEAAVE HIIIMM!! HE THINKS SHE THINKS HE'S A MONSTERRRR SO HE CLAAIIIMED HERRR!!" Nyahaha. That's always warm and fuzzy to read about. Good job!! :) (goes off to hunt for more fanfics to read)
| Reviewed By: Lady Sianna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be alarmed when I say this, but I think I love you! This story was AWESOME!!! I enjoyed every moment of it, and burst out laughing several times, and was left fully satisfied by the end. I apologze for the two for one review, but Darkness was awsesome as well. I am so glad you decided to add more to it! You are a fantastic writer, and I can only imagine that your newer stories are probably even better! You have have a fangirl in me, that's for sure! I really enjoy your writing style, and the intersting plots you have used. I could go on and on, but I won't bore you with my ridiculous fangirl gushing. ^_^' Again, fantastic job!!
| Title: fiction
Reviewed By: Hesunohana On: April 13, 2009 16:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
I firt read the OS and then the sequel. so fun, so full of smex and all... well-written too. a shame that Inuyasha killed her. bravo !
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 17:48 EDT
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I love the way you mix comedy, seriousness, and romance together!!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 19:15 EDT
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I love this story, as well as 'Darkness'. You have a great sense of humor. I have a request. Because fics many times disappear, or I can't find them due to my bad memory, I've begun a project of copying stories to my hard drive and making a backup. However, I ask first. Would you mind if I copied your fics? Thanks! ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 21:33 EDT
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this was a great story! i would really like to know how kagome's mom takes her marriage, also what happens now that she's married? how do they get the jewel and what wish does inuyasha make? please write more.
| Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 29, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha awh wicked! loved them both!! (stories tho i didnt review darkness) keep writing!!
| Title: Jade Lotus
Reviewed By: Jade Lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 05:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!! Freaking awesome! I really liked the part where inuyasha attacked Kagome. It was unexpected (at least to me) but I loved it!! Awesome Job!!
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