| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! YOU JUST HAVE TO UPDATE!!
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Title: Still great!
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am still throughly enjoying your story and the unique plot you've developed. Good luck and happy writing.
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Reviewed By: mspotts(not logged in) On: April 03, 2006 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmigod! im so happy you updated, cause this is definitely my number one fanfic at the moment. please keep it up!! i'll be waiting...
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 18:04 EST
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I'm honeslty happy you DID get nominated! I never thought of it, myself, but it's good you did! And it's about time goddamnit, because this fic is absolutely wonderful and it doesn't get the recognition it deserves.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: April 01, 2006 17:16 EST
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How ever will Sesshomaru live, with Kagome in her own time... Lets hope sexual deprivation doesnt settle in lol. Does he even know about her time traveling? Well I suppose hes gonna find out. Cant wait for the next chapter ^-^
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another great chapter. I love how Shippou is now going to help with her little 'meetings' with her lover. ^_^ This is simply excellent and I've truly enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds. Excellent work, bravo!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: March 27, 2006 14:38 EST
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I'm SO FUCKING EXCITED YOU DECIDED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!! I'm so fucking HAPPY! Whoo hoo!! *does happy dance* Update soon, beautiful, I'm so freaking thrilled I've got the tingles.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 01:45 EST
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If Sesshomaru had said anything Im sure she would have realized just who her secret lover was. ;) Love the story ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 16:37 EST
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Yay! Chapter 2! Is good. Looking forward to Chapter 3 ^_^
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 00:39 EST
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Wow... I like the direction this is starting to take. Excellent chapter, can't wait to see more. Bravo!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 09:12 EST
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Yay, this was great! Something to look at: you said "Stomping over to her backpack, she pulled out her history book and crawled into her sleeping bag" but then said, "Nothing was more of a turn-off than quadratic equations." Is her book a history of math? ^_^ Another thing: "The headman of village" you might want to add a "the" or switch the word order. And another thing: "and then turning her head to pressing his lips with a needy kiss." Maybe I'm uneducated, but this seems awkward. "Fangs scraped against the arch her of throat" um, "of her"? "push her into to the upper stratosphere" you don't need the "to"? I only made these suggestions because I think this story is worth it. There are so many ways to go with this! Why can"t Inuyasha smell Sesshoumaru? Or can he but is in denial? Will Inuyasha start thinking that Kagome dreams of him? Will her sexually stimulated smell get to him and ignite passion within the hanyou? Keeping Sesshoumaru's thoughts and feeling mostly unknown is great, he can be really hard to write though you were doing just that wonderfully in "The Journey to the City of Endless Nights" (are you going to write more on that?). Did Sesshoumaru revive Rin as he did just after losing his arm in the series? Not that it is important for this story, just wondering. What is Sesshoumaru going to do if Inuyasha never lets Kagome out of his sight? Are they going to meet Shippo and the others in this story? Has Sesshoumaru given up on getting the Tetsusaiga? I would think he would still want it until he realizes that Inuyasha needs it, which took a while in the series. Heh, I'm rambling on as if you're going to write this long story when I'm just happy for the stuff you have already. Ah, smut. I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: ashimi On: March 19, 2006 16:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was better than the last one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u kept me guessing the whole time about what was going to happen next! that was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I loooooooooooooooooooove it you don't understand!! Oh Kami, I love this 'fanfiction' or one-shot or whatever, it's great! You should continue it! L8RZ! (^O ^)/~
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Reviewed By: mspotts (not logged in) On: March 18, 2006 09:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta review soon, all your fics are soo good! i loved darkness and this one looks really promising!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved Darkness & I cant wait to read more on this one. One of the most original Sess/Kag pairings Ive read!!! I L-O-V-E IT!!! Whats gonna happen when Kagome has to go back to her era though. Surely Sesshomaru would notice if she just vanished. LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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