| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (too lazy to log in) On: May 12, 2006 02:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please hurry and finish the next chapter. Maybe perhaps you'd be willing to make the chapters longer? And is Sesshoumaru ever going to take her back! I hope soo....then some nice hot steamy lemons! YAY!
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Title: Harsh
Reviewed By: vita On: May 10, 2006 23:27 EDT
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I do enjoy the lemon, but I feel that you appear a little harsh with Inuyasha. I am a big Inuyasha/Kagome fan so this my just be my devotion to the couple. Very well written though. Minor if any spelling/grammar errors.
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 16:43 EDT
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This was an awsome story! I kept trying to second guess motives and plot twists, I got most of them wrong though! I love it, I read "Darkness" and I loved that also. It keeps you guessing!!! But WHY did you leave us on a cliff!?!?! NOOO....you are an evil one, aren't you? Please keep the chaps. coming quickly!
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOMG!!! YOU STOPPED!! NO MORE STOPPING!! Omg.... I loooooooove it sooooooooo much!! But HORRIBLE (somewhat) CLIFFIE!! Evilllllllllllllllllllll!! .... .... .... Naraku's not that creepy.... lol! GReat fanfiction I reallly REALLY hope you continue it cause I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!! I mean people would have to be crazy not to love it. It's just so GOOOD!! Love it, keep writing!! L8RZ! (^O^)/~
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP(not logged in) On: May 05, 2006 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll review on both this time. Fluffys mad. Poor Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at work On: May 05, 2006 15:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Just to let you know I am enjoying this
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 07:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you were able to keep his idenity a secret for so long, most people would have broken down so much sooner in the story. I will look forwards to the updates. Perfect score.
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Reviewed By: Keke On: May 05, 2006 03:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story and the way you write! I can't wait to read the rest!! I want a happy ending though…
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely forgot about the cupid myth until a few minutes ago. >< Is that where you got this idea from? Pretty good myth, though a little depressing up until the end. Hope your version ends happily as well. …That was more than a little unexpected. I mean, Naraku knowing was obvious (you mentioned that bee and an 'ominous presence' a few chapters ago), but I really didn't think you'd have Kagome just hand her shards over like that. Shippou's reaction was a little strange too. Very OOC. Even more shocking was the fact that Sesshomaru, having taken to following Inu-tachi, didn't notice Naraku lurking around (him being a hanyou, I'm assuming he wouldn't be near as adept at hiding). I'm a little disappointed in the turn the character development has taken. ._. Very sad. Well, this chapter was pretty well written… I hope things get better and Kagome's backbone grows back soon! Oh, I did think it was tame; "semi". I really like this story… Glad you updated so soon. *claps* Please continue~!!! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: mj On: May 03, 2006 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your story. It's great, keep up the awesome work and until next time!
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000*notlogged in* On: May 03, 2006 20:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrvvvve this story!!! i hope you write again soon. this is one of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 03, 2006 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaww...Poor Kagome. Stupid Sessh.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha_demon509 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story is really awsome update soon!! :)
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Reviewed By: animegirl2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story I read Darknesss which was really great and now the sequeal is even better. This story plays so many different emotions. Keep up the great work also I just wrote my first fan fic I posted on this site it is called Kagome a Child of Darkness maybe you can read it and tell me what you think
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru (not signed in) On: May 02, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_o Ummm... Hmmm... I think I'm at a loss for words. Nah! OMFG, Naraku punked her for the shards!!! Holy shit, I can't breathe. Way to run out on her Sesshy *thumbs up* good job. How very honorable of you, you jerk! *runs from his dokasso* Okay this is a kick-ass canon fic but fuck that- Sesshy needs to kick Naraku's ass! Like now. You are a GENIUS Rhiannon!
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