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Title: Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 4: Ok... this was a good chapter, but I (personally speaking) draw the line at spankings. >.< That was so wrong of Sesshomaru! So rude. And where does Kagome get off telling Shippou about her and Sesshomaru? She's always thought of him as a child, though I'm sure he knows about sex, and now you're having her bribe Shippou to be her lookout? >< Mer... I've never liked Kagome's friends; Yuka especially. And it doesn't really have anything with the horrible way authors portray them either. Yuka, Eri and Ayumi just don't seem like real friends to me. It's like they want to live their life through Kagome. Since Kagome has the attention of one of the most popular boys in school, she should hook up with him. It doesn't matter to them if Kagome's interrested. He likes her and that's all that matters. And they're constantly jumping to conclusions about everything/everyone. I mean, what kind of friends don't let you borrow their notes? When you're at risk of failing no less. GAH! >< I don't like them... Well other than a few spelling mistakes and semi-S&M thing you had going on this chapter, this story is coming along really well. Hope you update soon! *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2: This was a really good chapter. The only thing I was unclear about was when Kagome woke up from the dream. It seems like something is missing between when Inuyasha almost jumped Kagome and when Sesshomaru comes in and saves her... Poor misunderstood Inuyasha. = ( He should just explain to Kagome that he's trying to prove himself to her. She's not exactly the brightest crayon in the box. Inuyasha should know that she wouldn't understand something like demon courting. But I guess it's okay since Inuyasha is probably running on instict (especially if we're using this chapter as an example). I'm sure you'll have Sesshomaru tell Kagome why they're fighting and, in turn , what Inuyasha really means by his over-protectiveness, as well as his eagerness to reassure her that he can provide and keep her safe. I'm really glad you made a sequel to 'Darkness'. Can't wait until Kagome finds out about Sesshomaru! ^o^ Please update soon. ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 02:34 EDT
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Yes! I am loving the sequel to Darkness just as much as the original. And you've left my mouth watering for when Kagome finds out it's Sesshomaru! (She's not always the brightest huh? But who can blame her with all those confusing emotions!) You're doing a really great job with all these chapters and I can't wait for your next update. I think I need to go take a cold shower ;P
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Reviewed By: cryptic91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 18:58 EDT
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This is such a great story! I'm hooked on Darkness and the sequel is just as great. I can't wait to read more, the ending is such a cliff-hanger. Please update soon and save me from my misery!
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: April 23, 2006 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOW!!!! PLEASE!!!????? I can't believe that after Kags saw the stipes, she can't figure out who he is. Oh well, you probably have a reason for doing so. I respect that. Just please update soon. 'Kay? Thankies. ^-^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: April 23, 2006 00:02 EDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!! So... Naraku was posing as Sesshomaru? Does Naraku know that Kagome doesnt know what Sesshomaru looks like? And how can she NOT have pieced it all together by now?! I mean white & red kimono, ONE arm (should be a dead give away), long silver hair, fluffy thingy, plus HOW cAN ANYONE FORGET THAT voice!?!? Love the story PLZ UPDATE SOON ^-^
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so love this fic. It's awesome how you made a Sess/Kag pairing without making it AU. Nice. I dont know if you did it on purpose, but this story reminds me a lot of the Greek story of Eros and Psyche. If you did, nice. If you didn't, look it up and you'll laugh at the similarities. I just hope Sess and Kag have a better ending than Eros and Psyche did. Anyway, love the fic ^.^ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 14:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Miroku and Inuyasha! They just had to interupt our fun. I can imagine that the next chapter will be the introduction of Saimyoshou to the inu-tachi. Would Kagome be so intent to shoot that arrow if she knew that her lover was at the receiving end? Poor gal. Sesshomaru is becoming much more possessive now. It makes me wonder how long this game of secrets will play out. He can't hide forever, and when the truth comes out tempers are going to explode! I can't wait! LOL! Another great chapter, and I anxiously await the next.
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Reviewed By: mspotts(notlogged in) On: April 18, 2006 09:39 EDT
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i am so loving this fic!!! when are you gonna update, huh???
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Title: CH 5
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! nuff said! Dying for the update!
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Title: YAHOO!
Reviewed By: SesshFanAlwayz On: April 16, 2006 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fanfic is INCREDIBLE! So unique! ^_^ Can't wait til' you post next chapter! ^_^
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: April 16, 2006 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the story i check my mail for! i just love this story so much, i really like this new chapter! i hope you write again soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it!!!! keep up with the greatwork
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Title: Ch 3 and Ch 4
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 3: A little confusion about reading her biology or history textbook - "'I want to go home,' Kagome wailed silently to herself as she struggled to read her _biology_ text by the light of their reluctant campfire." And then "Raising her gaze over the edge of her _history_ text," and then "'He won't try anything with Shippo around,' she thought as she turned back to her _biology_ book" Ch 4: I love the titles Kagome gives her mom (ex: Washer of All Things Dirty, Unraveler of Tall Tales). And this part - "Charmed by the show of affection, Kagome giggled and nuzzled him back. He tensed and withdrew fractionally, but enough to drop kick her heart into the mud." - I get it now. Maybe I'm a little loopy, but I felt the shift in his mood in a tangible way. So! Where is Chapter 5? ^_^ Looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I hadn't known you had wrote more! Lol, great fanfiction, she should of looked at the kimono after her mother washed it! Lol, I love your fanfiction, Sesshy's funny lol! I like the little bribe Shippo had! I loooooooooooooooove your fanfiction, it's really great! Trust me! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
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