| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 08, 2002 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Veggie eating cat food...now that's a first! I feel so sorry for him but most of what happened to him was of his own making. I just hope that somehow he and Bulma will end up together, Great chap as always. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a chapter! You know I sat on the internet all day waiting for your little mailing list update (sad I know but true). Well once again you out did yourself. The way you mesh the angst and just the right amount of comedy into this story is simply brillant. There's no other way to say it. One of my favorite things about this story, is how the chapters alterenate in a he said/she said format. More of your genius. Well now that I've flattered you enough I guess I'll go find something mildly entertaining to do until the 21st. Oh and damn...-JB |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't Vegeta tell Bulma don't look for him?? And now he misses her...but it was all his choice. She's only doing what he asked...
Good chpater, worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok if I can't be the first reviewer at FF.Net I'll be the first here:
Shit! The blackmailer person! I completely forgot! Wait.. I'll be it's that Dorothy-bitch. Unless we are going to have a new character enter-- either that or someone I can't think of or remember. Man.. I loved this chapter. That part about him eating the cat Tuna was great-- so very very funny. Oh but it was so sad too-- so wrong the world is. (Yoda-speak ^_~) I want him to be happy! Be HAPPY!! Get back together with Bulma and Trunks, live in that huge-ass house, eat plenty, and bask in the warmth of having the gravity room back! It's not fair! I want things to be normal again! I'm going to have to take like a million anti-depressants from reading this story. The thing about kilometers was interesting-- I kept having to replace the word with "miles" in my head (me being american and all). Like I said before; FANTASTIC chapter and I cannot WAIT until the next one. ^_^
I must be first somewhere!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after your other story, from bad to worse, i thought fics couldn't get any better, but of course, you came along again. you are truly amazing. no other fic writers could portray vegeta the way you can. im sure you must hear this a lot, but your fics are truly inspirational to those who write vegeta fanfiction. incredible! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 25, 2002 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's finally out in the open. Truths were said, questions answered, at least some of them. I just hope Veggie is found and given the medical attention that he obviously needs. At least Trunks looks like he's gonna be okay. As always, another great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can say it was better, and I can say it was worse. I liked both half's just as good. You know, you really made Bulma into a 'itch with a "B". why does she have to be so ignorant? I makes me sick, and still can't stand want she did. I want her to suffer.
And Tien too. plus yamcha, and chichi, and goku, and 18. Even though she really didn't do anything. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh God, I haven't even finished reading it yet, and I am reviewing, expect another one for this chapter. That line about the house of Vegeta, I love it. It's the most sweetest thing, I read in a while. I hope the rest of the chapter is just as good. |
Reviewed By: trunks'girl On: May 16, 2002 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome fic, but y..y...Y do u keep on stopping, goddamn cliffhangers...also, did u have some technical difficulties, cuz ur update here, took pretty long...but keep up the wonderful work thnx |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 06:55 CDT
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yet another involving chapter. What does go through that mind of yours? :) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:07 CDT
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Ooo, I'm in suspence of what will happen next! |
Reviewed By: Kandy. On: May 11, 2002 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated...Yah!! Who would have thought that was all he need? I can't wait to find out what Vegeta tell Bulma. Looking Forward |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 11, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update!! I loved the scene in the bathroom, specially when Yamcha came in to relieve himself. Poor Trunks is suffering but thanks to daddy it looks like he's gonna be okay, even though Vegeta's "treatment" seemed somewhat unorthodox. Can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of everything that is good and holy why do you keep stopping?!?!?!?! Damn... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a dramatic chapter! Well worth the wait! |
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