| "Into the East" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: DESTRUCTION_13 On: June 13, 2006 06:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!!I have to say that this is one of the best stories i have read!!! you give very great detail and you made me feel like i was right there the only thing i have to complain about is i cant see vanessa in my head clearly all i know is that she has blonde curly hair i have been reading this story since around ten P.M and its 3:10 in the morning lol looove the story and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 11:24 EDT
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Great chapter! I love your new characters. I wish I could ride a flying horse...
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Reviewed By: Sess's girl On: June 11, 2006 02:39 EDT
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Nice job! I have been waiting for this for a while now. I can't wait to see more of Naraku in your chapters, he creates angst and excitment into any plot. Sayonara and best of luck with your fanfic.
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Title: Its GRRRRReat
Reviewed By: laa_girl (nsi) On: June 09, 2006 12:43 EDT
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I love this new chappie and i have to give a big thanx 2 u for reviewing my story unfortunately i have not gotten the chance to write and more so far so i can not hope you would do it again! I love the new bonding that Vanessa and Sesshy are doing! it is fluflicious! Anaways you yhave constructed a great basic story here as i have said before you are a great writer! you are the first one on my fav list to update so i congradulate you fo being so convicted to ur story! Thanx for all the laught giggles tears and hot headded moments along the way! Laa_girl
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Reviewed By: nessie-poo On: June 09, 2006 07:32 EDT
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hehe, thts good for me!lolz, k, no computer i mean im practically on da computer every single day of the week!!! *bad vanessa bad vanessa slap* i cant live without it!!!!noooooo not to mention i have my exams tomorrow and im doomed!!!!geography and english!!!arghghgh k i hav to go and study now lolz, i had to take a break and lucky for me da next chappie was up!!!lol bye bye keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Crystaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you? I'm sorry I kinda got pissy...I have alot of people speeling my name wrong and after a while it starts to get to you with EVERYTHING...Anywho on to the wonderful story stuff! I love this chapter!! I love the way that Seshy goes into over-protecto-mode as I call it. I love this story, and I love the way it is writen. Yay! -^__^- Go you and your awesome power! Anywho you definitely write with a wonderful touch that I have fallen in love with! (I must say this...) Squeee!!! -^___^- I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: June 08, 2006 10:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is brilliantly written. Of all the pairings beside the obvious SESS/KAG, SESS/RIN, Vanessa is one of the most intelligent and well suited for Sesshoumaru. She is every bit his equal, not some dimwit who falls over a tree stump and suddenly loses her clothes after being mesmerized by his eyes or his "luminous" hair. This story does not insult your intelligence and proffers hope that "thinking" people can fall in love too. I eagerly await your coming chapters. Kudos to you. Simply intoxicating
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 07, 2006 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. No wonder it took you so long to update it's almost 20 pages long! I like how Sess is slowly warming up to her. Their relationship is quite realistic and you've done an excellent job portraying Sess too! Can't wait to see what happens next!! - Cochrann
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Reviewed By: nessie-poo On: June 05, 2006 11:16 EDT
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amazing, just simply amazing! i swear im like ADDICTED to u r story! i keep on reading it and reading and reading...until it stops...and then i go NOOO!lolz, i hav bad news for u...im leaving for my holiday in two weeks and where im going doesnt hav any internet and i wont b able to complement u r story or read it!!!!!noooo!!! i cant even check my e-mails!!!which in other words SUX!!!! so update as soon as u can( 4 me...lolz) and in da hols dont FINISH IT!!!lolz, im jk if u do FINE!*pout* just kiddin', k im being random now i guess ill leave....hehe -_-'
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Title: ^ _ ^ me like
Reviewed By: lovely liz On: May 21, 2006 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a realy good story keep the good work up and i hope u update soon ill be waiting. is Naraku going to kidnape Vanessa or Rin agine? what is Sesshoumaru going to do about Naraku, the little pest? and what was Sesshoumaru's father was trying to tell him? what happens to Vanessa's boyfriend/fucher husbeen is he going to try to look for her or is he going to find someone else to take to partys? well i hope u update soon in till then
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new chapter i had read it before and reviewed it before but i am doing it again! PLS hurry with the next chappie i love THIS STORY! You c i have had a lot of bad things going on i went to the ER cause i got REALLY sick and i found out my grandmother who is practily my mom is dying from cancer my mom died of cancer when i was 11 but this story takes my mind off all my troubles thanx for this it is truly a miricle for me!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 23:19 EDT
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I loved this chapter! Sesshoumaru's interaction with Vanessa and his father is very realistic and well done. You've done a good job rounding out each of the characters and giving them their own unique personalities. Can't wait for the next update and don't worry about taking so long as long as it's under a month...'cause as long as the chapter is really good and well thought out I don't mind the extra wait.
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Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome! I will love reading it forever! BTW, if possible, read my story. It's Sess/Kag!
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Reviewed By: Crystaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will continue to be a loyal reader and as such, would like to thank you for mentioning me, one with no such talent to write as your self, even though you did spell my name wrong but I'm not holding that against you. I can't wait until the next chapter!! Oh, and I got an account just so I could be informed quickly to any updates!
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you are a wonderful writer! it is rare to come across a write who goes into such fine detail! This is a great read you deserve an award! You take everything slowly AND THAT IS WHAT I LOVE YOU TAKE THE TIME TO LAY THE STORY OUT PIECE BY PIECE! You make reading so much more enjoyable! thanx for supplying my good time! Thanx Again Laa_girl!
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