| "Into the East" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: nessie-poo On: November 27, 2006 12:50 EST
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shes alive!!!!*does dance*, y cant sesshy admit his feelings already eh?...tut tut, too much tension in ur chaps, drivin me craxy lol, i wonder...wats gnna happen next...i like tht idea..travellin all da way to england...tht sounds so cool!!!lol -_-' as usual, good chap
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Reviewed By: jibrille On: November 27, 2006 01:39 EST
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great so far never thought you would kill her I would just hope that you didn't send her back. That whole story has more of a different world than travelling through the past. but it is yours to decide. keep it up
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Reviewed By: RFGH On: November 11, 2006 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! You are such an awesome writer! Nice Ideas too, but what happens to Vanessa?! Dieing in anticipation for the next one!
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: November 11, 2006 20:25 EST
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Adorable. (note sarcasm) If I wrote this it would probably end right here. I like sad endings. But, since I like Fluffy-kins better . . . Pretty Please Bring Neesa-san Back! Would Sess have to openly admit he loved her for the tensaiga to work? Just guessing. As answer to your question on what you have done: You almost made me cry, and I haven't cryed in a year now. I'm not sure if I should thank-you or yell at you. THANK YOU, YOU BIG MEANIE!!
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Reviewed By: jibril [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 06:13 EST
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hey, nice chapter. I don't know but I can't imagine that you make a sad ending (as if there isn't enough shit happening where we live:) hm surpise surprise, let me gess it will take you quite some time for the next chapter but this one was good.
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Alchemist On: November 11, 2006 01:44 EST
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no vanessa can't die!!! sesshomaru tenseiga has to work! she needs to live so she can be with him forever!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 00:42 EST
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Evil evil girl! What have you done indeed!
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y did u make her died? she cant died she was the only person that knock some scence into Sesshomaru. plz bring her back some how. *cries*
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Reviewed By: KajiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! So sad...but I have to say... I still loved it, some stories you know what's going to happen the moment you start readin it... but you always keep me surprised on how your chapters end... Keep up the great work, I'm a big fan!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 22:27 EST
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My question exactly, "What have you done!?" Great chapter, but I so hope the next one comes along soon.
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Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: *crying* BRING VANESSA BACK!!! WORK, TENSEIGA!!! SESSHY HAS TO MATE HER!!!! Sesshomaru: *growls and pulls me away* Me: NOOO!!!!! Naraku: Kukuku...Just as evil as ever...
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Reviewed By: Crystaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 15:01 EST
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O.O....She's.....dead? I know you have something going on, so I'll just trust you to do what you feel you need to do for the story. NARAKU NO BAKA!!! >_< Can't wait until next time!!
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Title: OMGGGG
Reviewed By: nessie-poo On: November 10, 2006 13:35 EST
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*SHOCK* wat is happenin here? nooooo, she cant die!!! *sobbbb* she has to come bak alive n marry sess!!! stupid sword!!! get commanded god dammit *glares at sword* omg, i read ur profile n ur 23!!! cool and u live in germany!!! thts amazing man, im half austrian half korean sooo ya...hehe, tht was kinda random -_-' such a sad chappie...she must come back alive!!! bad sesshy, tryin to kill naraku then savein her!!! evil...lol luv da chap
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Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 16:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee!!!!!!!!!! Sesshomaru: *covers ears* Naraku: *sweatdrop* Me: *randomly* Evilly evilly evil evil!!! Naraku: *anime fall* @.@ Sesshomaru: *snickers* Me: *bounces around* Sesshomaru: *Smirks and pulls me away* Naraku: *wakes up* Huh? Where is everyone? Inuyasha: DIE NARAKU!!! Kagome: SIT BOY!!! Inuyasha: *falls Face first into ground* Me: *walks in* Poor Sesshy...Vanessa wants to leave!!! Sesshomaru: What?!
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Reviewed By: KajiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 02:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta give it to ya... this is on of my fav fanfics... and it only seems to get better the more you write. I'm always looking forward to your updates! ^_^ And what an evil way to end that chapter... grrr
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