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Title: U ROCK!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im soooo luving this story ur such a good writer. May i ask sumthing is that lil gurl suppose to be Vanessa leading Sesshomaru home from the darkness? I also like how u put Inu no Tashio (i think i spell it right lol) alot in this chapter becuz Badass and kool at the same time. well update soon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 00:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Blah blah blah. Anyways, I HAVE RETURNED!!! Sesshomaru: Ugh...Baka... Ina: *pouts* meanie... Sesshomaru: *smirks*
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 23:21 EDT
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I liked this chapter. I really think your writing is getting better and please continue with the smaller paragraphs - they made it so much easier to read your story. Please update soon I'd really like to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Sess's Girl On: August 12, 2006 13:07 EDT
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It was really good but I wanna cry for Sesshy though. I hope you have a great time in Germany, and I'll give some forward things about there since I was there until august 5th. the only english you will find is on mtv or the news channel.(mtv has Ghost in the Shell but it still drove me nuts because i couldn't see Inuyasha) Like I said this chapter is fantastic and makes me wanna cry for Sesshy.
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: July 11, 2006 20:40 EDT
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I really liked this chapter. and let me guess...Mitsue is Naraku's vehicle for seeing into Sesshoumaru's fortress? Update soon, please!!! -Cochrann
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Reviewed By: DESTRUCTION_13 On: July 01, 2006 07:51 EDT
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THIS CHAPTER WAS FUNNY!!!!! I THINK THAT THIS MITSUE CHARACHTER ISNT ATSUKE AND THATS JUST ME LOL YOUR A VERY GOOD WRITER AND I AGREE WITH YOU THAT SESSHOMARU HAS CRAZY THOUGHTS IN HIS HEAD I CANT WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Sess's Girl On: June 28, 2006 04:47 EDT
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Nice job. And about Robert Herrick, I had to do a presentation about him and jeez I have a heck a of a hard time on finding things about that guy. Any ways.......back to the fanfic. I like it and it doesn't seem rushed, I can tell you put alot of heart into your stories.
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Reviewed By: Mian On: June 27, 2006 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Ello. Prettyful story. Continue writing.
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 02:11 EDT
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This just jeeps getting better! You charcaters (sp) are developed very well! Your dor sounds so cute and i understand about the quarnteen, i am about to spen my last two years of HS in a boarding school 950 miles away form my dog! We can stay srtong together, thank you for youe ever lasting encouragement, update when possible. Your fan always! Laa_girl
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl (lazy... as expected) On: June 25, 2006 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finally got around to actually giving you a review, not just an email! ^^ i deserve a pat on the back ne? thanks for reviewing my story! it made me happy, and was the reason i got around to writing another chapter! the dance scene was sweet, and i think sesshomaru walked away with some new techniques! update soon! MG --sorry while i was energized enough to write this, i still couldn't log-in. oh well! >< next time!
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 23, 2006 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved the poem at the end too...it's perfect for our favorite Taiyoukai!
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Title: mnesai1
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yours is one of many that made me decide to join this site. I am Vickey one of your earlier reviewers. This is such a good piece. I have a degree in Journalism and this makes me want to write creatively again. I am also encouraging you to update. Can't wait to see what happens between these too. Again, so intelligent. Thank you...
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Reviewed By: erikphan1 On: June 16, 2006 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*does a very happy dance* this is possibly the best Sesshoumaru/OC (when the OC is human) that ive ever read lol. I really enjoy this fanfic a lot and i hope you will continue. *gives author a big cookie* Your Obedient Servant O.G. erikphan1
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Reviewed By: Sess's Girl On: June 15, 2006 15:16 EDT
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Bravo! I've been so busy trying to get my fanfic finished I have hardly any time to read yours. I can't wait to see what Naraku does.(I'm still waiting for the fanfic I let my friend read.) Very creative and the best of luck of not having writer's blocks.
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Title: CUTE!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i never thought Sesshy could do something so ....... dare i say sweet! You have really brought out the true character in him! I love it! I love the horses and Shizu but it is making me a little home sick because i have not seen my little dog missy who is a shi tzu in 3 weeks! Well this chapter was Very well written and just to let you know about you authors notes i read them i think you opinion is very important and i love to hear about your personal life! AND I HAVE I FEELING YOU ARE A GIRL OR ELSE YOU WOULDN'T CARE WHAT WE THOUGHT! That is usually the wat guys are and you are WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAy to thoughtful and you bring so much emotion you cant be a boy. and lastly you write about Venessa from a girls POV there is no WAY a boy Could EVER write her like you do! You do an AMAZING JOB! With college and all! I am so Proud you have you o my favorites list throught the summer you are the only one who has updated you have true convictuion so you ar ethe BEST i know in my mind! BTW you said you would wait but waint no longer My chapter is up and it is the longest one i have ever written i can't tell you they will all be that long but it is 9-10 pagesd and that is long for me! Thanx for truly making my day and mentioning me at the end of each story it makes me FEEL important and that is why i come back for that and for your awsome writing! Keep going you are doing GREAT! Laa_girl
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