| "Into the East" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: February 28, 2007 16:02 EST
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it's okay to look back and change stuff. I'm only on chapter 2 of one of my stories (that I haven't posted yet)and I keep looking back and making changesw to chapter 1. I don't really think you need to change the first chapters, but i really want to know what you do to them. Take as long as you need to work on them, the only reason I get a chance to work on any fanfiction is because my teachers make me (i know, hard to believe) I'm willing to bet that all of your reveiwers are understanding of what you are thinking about the story and are willing to wait. and Kami, it felt weird typing that.
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Reviewed By: Idiot745 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 00:11 EST
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an over haul on your early chapters eh? Bold but might as you say improve the story line. Hope you do a good job and keep up the good story.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 17:15 EST
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I understand your need to redo your earlier chpaters...I'm actually starting to do that with my own in my brief spare time...good luck improving your work and I look forward to chpater 22!
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Title: WHY OH WHY!
Reviewed By: laa_girl(nsi) On: February 27, 2007 17:09 EST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you can't stop it was such a good placeto pick up and finish and please i don't mean to be rude or rush or anything but PLEASE for the sake of my sanity HURRY!
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Reviewed By: Rubix_Cube On: February 17, 2007 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable read. Great work.
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 15:39 EST
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haha forgot I was signed in. I'm just that smart
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Title: shikiori(nsi)
Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 15:38 EST
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Awsome! I think I'm finally over my bipolar reveiws. It's great that you updated!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 18:49 EST
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Hmmm, 3 days to read through all the stories thus far, and all these chapters rock my socks. Seriously, this story is awesome, though I couldn't keep up with it during the summmer (I wasn't in the mood for Inuyasha tales again until recently). Anyway, Sesshomaru is an underplayed character, and really getting into how he thinks, instead of changing it immediately? Well, I think a warmer Sesshy is cool, but taking the time to explain his reasoning is the sign of a decent amount of time spent studying him. Anyway, love Vennessa, awesome OC, as well as the mental attack on Sesshomaru, something I don't think anyone has really used before. Not to mention, hey, I love the idea that both Dog Brothers suck at admitting their feelings to the ones they love. I mean, cmon, it's not easy being them. Anyway, like I said I love the story, and I want to see more. So, which nation will they travel to the east coast of the states to? The french, the english, the spanish or portugese(sp?)? This is definitely a different take than any I've seen before. Anyway, Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 16:23 EST
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WHOO-HOO!!!! UPDATED!!! Sesshomaru: ... Naraku: *hugs Ina* Me: GAH!!! LEMME GO!!! Naraku: No. Me: *cries* Good and funny chapter! *smile* Sesshomaru: Well...That was a quick tantrum... Naraku: You said it.
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: Laa_girl nsi On: February 01, 2007 15:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg it doesnt get any better! you are so good at what you do KEEP GOING I HAVE TO SEE HOW IT ENDS! and please for the sanity of your readers........................DON'T WAIT 2 MOnTHS to do so!
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Reviewed By: KajiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 01:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for an update forever!! It's about time ^_^ you make me wait to long, But I must say the chapter was well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: Ina Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 21:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* WAHHHHH!!!!!! Sesshoamru: *eye twitch* I do not enjoy that wailing... Naraku: And you think I do? Me: *sniffle* Sesshomaru: *hugs me* Shh..... Naraku: *smirks* Sesshoamru: *also smirks* Me: Alright....Fine.....Nice job....BUT WHY WILL VANESSA LEAVE SESSHOMARU?! Sesshomaru: This isn't a soap opera. *drags me away* Naraku: Exactly. *follows*
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Title: Yatta!!
Reviewed By: Sess's Girl On: November 29, 2006 22:40 EST
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I'm sorry I didn't write earlier but your chapters are so long. I had to go to work that day and didn't have any time to write a review at all but I'm so happy! She's alive again. I was so appalled when I saw she had died. Well, later. I gotta finish up my own fanfic chapters. Sayonara!
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: November 28, 2006 17:17 EST
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YAY! BOO! You updated and brought Nessa back to life! You're still making her leave! You RULE! You SUCK!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really stay in character with Sesshy, sometimes annoyingly so, but that's good lol. I imagine this stories still got a good bit left to it, and that makes me happy. Cuz although I can't wait to see how it all ends, I DONT WANT IT TO END. lol.
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