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Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 01:22 EDT
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I think your story has a lot of potential, and the way you set up the story line so far was very flowing. I like it. I would love to see an update to this sometime soon. :)
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Reviewed By: mgp On: March 31, 2006 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For such a fanfic, I give giddy thumbs up. I like mystery, gore, and adore angst. The whole plot and setting, I love it. Heero being engaged to Relena, I'll keep loving when Duo continiously angsts. Aw, my 1x2 love is outweighed by my love for Duo-sadness... If it ever turns 1x2, I'd like to bash Heero for being an idiot and ever thinking of marriage with Relena, bleh. At least Relena is being a somewhat pleasant character, except she seems naive and talkative in an annoying way.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 00:00 EST
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one more thing '...I thought he was a prince? A prince fallen from the stars, just for me..." She trailed off, eyes content and far away.' *shivers* I just wanted to shut her up with something! maybe I can super glue her mouth shut *smiles*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is interesting and I really didn't want to stop reading soo, pretty please with a cherry on top, update soon, kay?!
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Title: Darkanger
Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm hooked. This has great potential. I love a good mystery but angst is the best and it sounds like Duo is going to get a good deal of it. I hope to see a more jaded Duo than most writers seem to come up with. So far I think you really have taken account for the growth the guys have gone through in the years after the war. It seems most realistic. I applaude that. As for the muderer, well.. I'm on the edge of my seat. There are so many ways this can go. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 24, 2006 16:44 EST
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the starting of the fic sounds good. i'm interested to see how the relationships between everyone in the story develop so update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good start! I'm hooked and hope to see more of this in the very near future. I look forward to finding out who the murderer is. And nothing against Relena *wrinkles nose* but I hope the ultimate pairing is 1x2.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: March 23, 2006 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the best word for this is probably intriguing. It's brilliantly written and realistic. POOR DUO! *sob*, please fix that *sniffle* Update soon!
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