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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 31, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so now that I know guilt WORKS...heh, heh! No, really though...THANK YOU!!! I was out of town for 24 hours and came back and THERE WAS A NEW CHAPTER. You have made my whole Labor Day Weekend!!! After a 6 hour drive home, this was a perfect treat...except of course for Heero and Relena (ew)...but the fact that he had to think about Duo was PERFECT. That'll keep him thinking. In fact, I kind of look forward to him losing a little of that perfect soldier self-control with the "braided idiot." And who WOULDN'T want to think of Duo during sex, anyway? (Okay...maybe Relena...I gotta grant you that one.) But seriously, who in their RIGHT MIND? So, THANKS AGAIN. And I'll try not to lay on the guilt...but this story is so unique and so tense and edgy that it's hard to wait for! Always wanting more! ---snow
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Reviewed By: Monje EJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 17:38 EDT
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Wow ...ya that about sums it up. I haven't read a fanfic (specailly gundam wing) in awhile but I must say I'm glad I started reading your first. Keep up the awesome work! PS I absolutely love Duo's character =D
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 29, 2007 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suffering from serious withdrawal! Hope you update again soon! (You spoiled us so last time with two updates three days apart. See what happens? We whine.) This is a seriously dark, intriguing story...and Duo is HOT. I'd really like to see them get somewhere in the investigation before someone else ends up dead. (Unless it's Relena...her I wouldn't miss.) But then, that'd sort of cut the story short, wouldn't it? Just, please, more soon...as soon as you get the chance.
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Title: PLEASE! IM BEGGIN YA!
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: August 09, 2007 22:24 EDT
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You better update soon...I'm jonesing I tell you....FEED ME GOOD FANFIC. PLEAASSSEEEEE!!!! POST A SENTENCE! A WORD! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon- On: August 08, 2007 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pining for more. This is a dark, compelling story...full of twists and turns, and just too interesting and unique to tear myself away from. Hoping you'll update again soon!!!
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Title: OH MY...
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: August 04, 2007 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never...NEVER read a fanfiction so well put together. I have never wanted to read more of something ever. You MUST finish this. THIS IS AMAZING. I love how you present the characters especially your older version of Quatre. PERFECT! finally someone who doesn't think he would stay a soft quiet little thing for his whole life. The relationships you've created are really really intense. This. Is. AMAZING. I don't know any other way to say it. PERFECT!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch8, and with the closing door, heero's made Duo open game to the murderer. Though it was excellent planning... knowing that Quat's arrival would be enough of a disturbance to conceal a getting after the room had served it's purpose. ^_^ I love this story so much and I have to thank you again, if I hadn't before for sharing it! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 02:51 EDT
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*hugs you* that's ok, when can we see some of your art? I love the progression of this story!! And I definitely agree about Quatre. I think there are something features that just won't change with Duo, but man the tension between Wu Fei -Trowa and Quatre has my interest peeked!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 15, 2007 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I LOVE you! Killer chapter! It's about time Heero got a clue. But now I can't help wondering if Duo's gonna pack up and leave or stay and help in spite of Heero...or to spite him...and Relena. Sure does seem like she was the first to overstep, but Duo sure stooped just as low. Cat fight is right! Yowch. I hope you're updating again soon, cuz I am SO hooked.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I'm so glad to see an update on this one! It's so intriguing and has me on the edge of my seat. I caught myself hoping Duo would say "hell no, I'm not apologizing to that b**ch." lol As much as I'm enjoying this, I'm hoping it's getting close to revealing not only who the killer is, but also what has happened to cause animosity between Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre. I have a hypothesis as to what it is based on hints within the story, so I'm anxiously waiting to see if my hypothesis is correct. I love the tension within the chapters between all the characters. It's palpable. And Duo is so aggressive in what he wants, though I do hope he's uke if they wind up together *waves Duo as uke banner*. Looking forward to the next update which will hopefully be soon!
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Reviewed By: cewo On: July 14, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Luv that we got two new chapters one right after the other!! The suspense is killing me! Damn that Duo is tenacious, but he'd have to be because Heero is a blockhead!! Don't know who Bill is but it is definitely someone on the inside (please NOT Duo!!) May we have more soon please? (yes, I am greedy) Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 08:42 EDT
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2 updates? in a week? you love us you really love us ;) awesome characterization
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Definitely Wufei who-dunnit. He was in the bedroom with ample time to spare when Relena was snoozing blissfully, coulda set the camera easily.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 13, 2007 14:06 EDT
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i'm really happy to see an update for this fic! you have no idea how long i've waited to read more about the unsolved conflicts between each of the pilots with each other in the midst of all the suspense around the "butcher." please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 12, 2007 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, sweet nectar of the gods! More of the story! Yay!!! I have a feeling I know where the guy Quatre sent ended up. Ewwww. Gruesome. Heh, and I can't wait to find out what happened between Quatre and Wufei and Trowa. There's a story there for sure! (Not to mention what'll happen when Heero ever admits that HELL YEAH, he liked what Duo did.) So much still to come. This story is intriguing, well-written, tense, and FUN. Can't wait for more!
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