| "Shatter" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:01 CDT
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:( cliffy? As always enjoyed, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 03:59 CDT
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Did good work on getting the tension up. Heero reacting is difficult to write at times because anything he does react to would have to be pretty intense. Feel sorry for the guy though, having no clue what's up with his friends. I'm still thinking it's Wufei who did it.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 25, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wufei and the oatmeal is the most hilarious final line to any chapter of any story I think I've ever read!!! I still laugh when I think of it. It's fantastic. And here's hoping you update again SOON. It's been three weeks, and I've got serious withdrawal symptoms!
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Reviewed By: Animestar73 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!! OH POOR DUO AND HEERO!!!! I HATE RELENA!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a great stroy! The way you set it up, with a hint of mystery! Ur such a great author!!!!! Oh A Quarte x Trowa x Wufei traingle??? O.O! interestin!! Please Update!
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Title: Shatter
Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 01, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I see recent updates have been coming fairly quickly, so I dare to hope there'll be more soon. This chapter was awesome. The whole story is very engaging...and I'm curious how it will pan out.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 01, 2007 15:24 CDT
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so duo finally shows heero that he's interested in him. what will heero do now? what's going to happen with the everyone else as the case gets deeper and everyone's relationships with one another get entangled? please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 22:32 CST
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I'm loving this fic, my only complaint is that there isn't enough of it. Although, i am glad i don't like oatmeal
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh I loved the final line in this chapter, with Wufei offering her oatmeal. That was priceless. You've done well with pointing out her double-standards in regards to idealism and what she practices. I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and glad to see you are focusing on it again. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Angel_wing On: March 09, 2007 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not stop reading! I read all the chapters in one sitting because the story was so compelling! Please update again, I'll be the first one to read (hopefully....)!
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Reviewed By: midori820 On: March 09, 2007 04:32 CST
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love love love this fic! ooo the tension between everyone is just fab. and who is the killer? cos the clues are pointing to everyone, wufie hates the bill, duo like wufie says in a true colonist, and trowa is so quiet he's always suspicious. mwahaha. really great fic, dialouge, characters, and plot development all spot on, cant wait for the rest! and for Quatre?
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 13:48 CST
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YEA!! Wuffers!! Dish her up some Oatmeal! That triffling idiot! She choices to ignore the problems with the Bill that Wuffers just pointed out...she's so stupid, I hope she finds something round and chewy in her food. *hugs you* keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 08, 2007 01:00 CST
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thank you for a bit more enlightenment on the bill that gorgenstein bill. it certainly gives more reason as to why the killer is committing these crimes and why many colonists are against it, even if only a section was discussed here. wufei and relena's conversation was enlightening, as well as the ongoing tension between trowa and wufei surrounding quatre. heero's knowledge of what's not going on with his friends and relena may be a downfall for him, but who knows. please update again soon! i'm surprised that duo and relena haven't douched out with the bill, but maybe it's because of heero that they won't.....
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Reviewed By: Sadie Woods On: March 04, 2007 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I just feel so sorry for Duo. You can tell he's in love with Heero, but Heero is getting married to Relena. This promises to be quite interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: intangible On: March 03, 2007 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, i usually don't give perfect tens, but I'm also a practical, non-partisan person who believes that a fic should receive the grade it truly merits--and yours IS an absolute ten. You language is so fluid and pathos-invoking, and you hardly have any grammatical/spelling errors at all! Keep up the good work--I hope Heero gains a sense of introspection soon because he certainly needs it. And what's the story behind Heero and Duo? and Quatre...and WuFei??
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 02, 2007 05:04 CST
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i'm so glad to see an update! the suspense and tension is getting to me, especially the conversation between relena and duo, as well as the one about quatre. please keep up the good work and update again soon!
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