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Reviewed By: Angel_wing On: March 09, 2007 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not stop reading! I read all the chapters in one sitting because the story was so compelling! Please update again, I'll be the first one to read (hopefully....)!
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Reviewed By: midori820 On: March 09, 2007 04:32 CST
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love love love this fic! ooo the tension between everyone is just fab. and who is the killer? cos the clues are pointing to everyone, wufie hates the bill, duo like wufie says in a true colonist, and trowa is so quiet he's always suspicious. mwahaha. really great fic, dialouge, characters, and plot development all spot on, cant wait for the rest! and for Quatre?
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 13:48 CST
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YEA!! Wuffers!! Dish her up some Oatmeal! That triffling idiot! She choices to ignore the problems with the Bill that Wuffers just pointed out...she's so stupid, I hope she finds something round and chewy in her food. *hugs you* keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 08, 2007 01:00 CST
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thank you for a bit more enlightenment on the bill that gorgenstein bill. it certainly gives more reason as to why the killer is committing these crimes and why many colonists are against it, even if only a section was discussed here. wufei and relena's conversation was enlightening, as well as the ongoing tension between trowa and wufei surrounding quatre. heero's knowledge of what's not going on with his friends and relena may be a downfall for him, but who knows. please update again soon! i'm surprised that duo and relena haven't douched out with the bill, but maybe it's because of heero that they won't.....
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Reviewed By: Sadie Woods On: March 04, 2007 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I just feel so sorry for Duo. You can tell he's in love with Heero, but Heero is getting married to Relena. This promises to be quite interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: intangible On: March 03, 2007 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, i usually don't give perfect tens, but I'm also a practical, non-partisan person who believes that a fic should receive the grade it truly merits--and yours IS an absolute ten. You language is so fluid and pathos-invoking, and you hardly have any grammatical/spelling errors at all! Keep up the good work--I hope Heero gains a sense of introspection soon because he certainly needs it. And what's the story behind Heero and Duo? and Quatre...and WuFei??
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 02, 2007 05:04 CST
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i'm so glad to see an update! the suspense and tension is getting to me, especially the conversation between relena and duo, as well as the one about quatre. please keep up the good work and update again soon!
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Reviewed By: katleap [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 20:40 CST
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This is good! More please. :) I'm still trying to decide if Duo is behind it or not. He has multipual motives. Heero is seriously clueless. I hope some one opens his mind soon that he needs to want something. The snipes between Duo and Relena are great. Duo was winning until Relena pulled out the "And Heero loves me." card. He really can't refute that because Heero is with her even if he doesn't love her.
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Title: Oi!
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs you* glad you're still writing, I missed this story lots and now have other suspects. I love the underlying tension you have this chap between Wu Fei and Trowa. Trowa wanting to know about Quat but not asking and hanging on Wu's every word while Wu avoiding giving him anything more than the absolute minimum which in itself suggest that Wuffers and kit-Quat may have had more than tea before or after lunch... *cackles at her preverted thoughts* both even *snickers* still sticking with ya, and will still be here to the end of this because i think it's a really interesting story. Update when you can ^_^
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Reviewed By: cewo On: March 01, 2007 13:37 CST
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Awwww, poor kitty! Nice to see this fic back up....I was enjoying it the first time around. Hopefully, you will keep us updated! Can't wait for Heero to clue in and realize Duo is the only one for him!*LOL*
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Reviewed By: selena281 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 16:16 CST
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i am really enjoying this fic, though it looks like you may have left it to rot? T____T (hopefully you'll pick it back up again) you have a wonderful writing style, with complex (and i have to luv you for that) interpersonal relations. no one is a cookie cutter kind of character. XD just- the whole story is totally engaging! i'm dying to know how the plot plays out, and how you're going to progress heero and duo, esp with relena being a big part of things. you are an *awesome* writer! ^________^
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Reviewed By: Korune On: September 27, 2006 05:26 CDT
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AHH! Was cut off... **shruggs** All I said was keep up the good work, and I hope Duo's the killer and succeeds. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Korune On: September 27, 2006 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Love the story so far! I found myself reading it all over several times trying to 'read between the lines' to find any clues! >.< ~GRR!! So very frustrating! But I love it all the same. I'll love it even more if Relena dies... I didn't like her the minute I laid eyes on her... And when she opened her mouth... That just made me absolutely HATE her! But the spars between her and Duo, you've done nicely. And every word that comes out of that preppy, pink >censored
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Reviewed By: priscel - hey! On: July 16, 2006 00:31 CDT
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*hugs you* you are forgiven! Wahoo!! Duo stepped up into his personal space! I really love the dialogue here and dangit is Relena anoying. screaming like that again!!... probably another false alarm.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: me On: July 13, 2006 21:07 CDT
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suspense! ohmigosh - i dont want relena to die, but it sure would be nice if she were out of the picture so Duo and Heero could get together. silly Heero - so lacking in self-awareness. i cant wait for an update!
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