| "Runaway Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: 1fruitcake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i loves the story so far and i hope that you continiue to finish it and keep going.
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Reviewed By: blu_sunset [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! hope you didn't got tired of me. well, this chappy was very interesting. 6 pups, geez, it's gonna be painful for Inu... I just hope Kagome won't interfere too much, I wanna see their relationship continue. but, I dunno, it feels odd to know that Sesshoumaru actually loves Inuyasha. do me a favor and make them break up in the end, or make it all a dream and Inu wakes up scared, or Sesshoumaru. hmm, it doesn't matter, I just can't wait for you to write more. and good luck in finding a job!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 12:14 EDT
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o that sucks i wish u luck in finding one :) anyway wat is kagome doin there? lol UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the new chapter. Have fun at band camp, and don't worry you'll find a job soon! Yes! 6 pups would be awesome! 2 boys (heir and the spare) and 4 little princesses to drive their parents crazy. 6 kids Inu would probably turn into a real demon and poor Sess' hair would probably fall or be pulled out! See you next time ~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. update soon. Was a bit short though yes i don't have a job either :( *tear*
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Reviewed By: Slinkygirlinau On: July 04, 2006 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far I've really been enjoying reading it. Sad to hear you have to write in secret:( Good luck finding a nice job!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 10:53 EDT
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i liked it, yea i understand your problem with sneaking what yo ur writing and reading its sucks right lol. Anyway upate soon!
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Reviewed By: kagomite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 15:00 EDT
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why is inuyasha the female?
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Reviewed By: kagomite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rate this story a 10 out of 10 in the humor and enjoyment factors. Normally I wouldn't read a Sesshomaru and InuYasha story because there brothers. But I took a chance with this story and enjoyed it. Also the plot was funny. Keep up with writing this story.
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! i cant wait until the gang finds Inuyasha...and when he gives birth!! ahhhhh good job by the way ^__^
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Reviewed By: Helena On: June 30, 2006 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that inu-yasha should have 6 puppys
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Title: Make it Six
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fanfiction. With the exception of a few mistakes it is well done. It is a very enjoyable read. I vote they have 6. 5 boys and 1 girl. My name choices are for the boys: Akira, Haruka, Tsukasa, Kenji, and Yuki. For the girl Sakura.
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Reviewed By: blu_sunset [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this story keeps rocking!!!! it's amusing too, imagine Sesshoumaru yelling and swearing. oh... about the swearing: the dirty language is cool, but too dirty!! Sesshoumaru would never ever swear like that, Inuyasha would, but Sesshoumaru wouldn't. so if you could make Sesshou more calm with his language it would be the best. and he wouldn't call Inuyasha sexy, not in a million years, even if he's head over heals form him! well, that's what I had to say. keep updating please, this is a fanfic that worths reading!
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Title: A litter
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story thanks for the update, I love it! Give the brothers a litter of 6. Yeah 6 is a good balance for trouble. I have 4 and a set of twins on the way and let me tell you, with 6 children life gets real interesting! Plus you can play with the personalities alot! No two kids are the same, trust! My oldest girl is the leader of the pack, she's the little boss. My oldest boy is the enforcer for his sibs, any body picks on any of them he's the one they run to. It doesn't matter how big the other kid is. My youngest boy is the quiet on always looking out for the others and my baby girl is just that the baby. Atleast until the twins are born. So you see six kids are a blessing and a handful. And if you aren't convinced try to imagine a highly emotional and a calm, cool and ever calulating Sesshomaru trying to usher six little 'angels' threw dinner, bath and BED! ^_~ ~B reading U!
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Title: Runaway Puppy
Reviewed By: fluffy's cutiepie On: June 29, 2006 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why r u so evil. i love the chapter but why did u have to make it so short. u better make it up or else 1. you'll dissapiont your #1 fan and 2. ill hunt u down (thouh not really). plz update. P.S. i also love "Experiment".
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