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| "Oh...Crap..." Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 not logged in 'cause my pc sucks On: August 30, 2006 16:59 CDT
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I've been reading! Really, I have! My pc just decides to spaz randomly and unfortunately this last time I couldn't leave reviews anywhere. Pissed me off... >.> So anyways, ineresting chappie! I highly doubt Seth will go willingly... That's what rope is for! ^_^ And I just want to give you a high five for being a band geek just like me! ^_^ I got back from band camp in a different state a few days ago. THE WORST sun burn in the world, especially on my face. T.T *cries* My first competition is coming up so soon and we haven't completed the song yet! >.< I'm on guard, so we can probably fake something, but drill hasn't been fully done yet... >.> When does your school start? Mine doesn't start until Sept. 6, although I am in NY. Well, now that I'm done ranting, I can't wait for your next chapter! ^_^ Happy writings and good luck in school and marching band! ~Tori-chan, your fellow band geek~
| Title: Gomen!!!
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SOOOO sorry that I haven't been able to read your wonderful fanfic much sooner than now. My new school is keeping uber busy, which it's supposed to do, sadly. But the fanfics, ch's 10 and 11, perfect!! I enjoy the little fun moments you throw in here and there. And I'm definitely liking where this fanfic seems to be going. I can't wait to know what happens next. It was torture having to wait to find time to read it. Continue and much love!!!
| Reviewed By: Nyami Rose On: August 17, 2006 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...I like this. Great plot-I was NOT expecting the Ra-damned pharoah to kiss Malik-remind me to kick his butt next time I see him. As for the lemons, for the first time, that was pretty good. I've seen the worst, trust me, nice effort! ^_~ Please Continue! ^_^ -Nyami
| Title: Tira speaking
Reviewed By: Cori Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tira:I've seen stories like this one b4 but otherwise you get 10's! I like how you had Bakura and malik burst in on ryou and however you spell his name. Also the rod confusion was awsome. I caught on b4 Ryou did. yay! Me: Please excuse my weird yami who has taken over my computer.
| Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 10:11 CDT
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Hey! ^^ Great lemon! I really liked it and keep going!
| Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done, well done. *claps* I'm very proud of you. Not only was your lemon well done, it also brought out the basic meaning behind your fanfic and behind your couples. I'm very proud and can't wait to see your next stroke of genius.
| Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 03:18 CDT
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Yay! You went through! Really, you couldn't have made me happier ^^. It was great, it is great and I'm sure it stays great ^^. Can't wait for the next chappie.
| Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...wonderful...*sobs* And you already have my opinion on the lemon next chapter, so do as your heart tells ya!
| Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:43 CDT
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Yeys! ^_^ Another chappie for me to indulge myself in. That was gfreat, even though I picked up a few grammar errors on my radar. Unfortunately, it never stops working. ^^;;; The errors were so few and so unnoticable that they didn't affect the flow of the story at all. Ok, the "here" instead of "hear" thing threw me off a bit, but that's 'cause I was reading fast. Yeah, I like the story that much. Ok, time for a random questoin: Will this story turn Y/X? It says "Yaoi" as the category, so I'm hoping for a "yes," even though I'd settle for a "no." I'm a big fan of fluff too. ^^ I was happy to get reviewer recognition. My songfic will be worked on as soon as I find what I've already written. Unfortunately, my drawer has a pile of papers so massive, I'm scared it will attack me one day. *sigh* I'm off to find my writing. Happy writings to one of the coolest authoresses ever! ~Tori-chan~
| Title: UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooh this is good though i do kinda wish to see yugi go back in time to placate the pharaoh's wrong love interest. but other than that i love baku/ryou and malik/marik soo kawaii!! update again soon!!
| Reviewed By: Youshiie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please continue writing it its wonderful. I really like Bakura and Ryou. I hope you really do finish this story because i think its great. Write soon, Thanks, -Youhiie.
| Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:58 CDT
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Yeys! You continued! ^_^ *does happy dance* It's so exciting! So dramatic! So hysterical! So... perverted, but that's ok. ^_^;;; I can't wait for the next cheppie 'cause you just write so well. I'm feeling a major urge to write a Ryou-loves-Malik-but-Bakura-loves-Ryou fic coming on and as with most, it'll be a songfic. Look for it in the next month or so! ^_^ Maybe that'll help me pass the time between now and your next update... *sigh* Happy writings! ~Tori-chan~
| Title: Let Me Make my Suggestion...
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 12:00 CDT
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Okay, here's the thing. The selfish part of me really wants you to finish the story, because I'm itching to see how it goes. And I don't think anyone else could finish it the way you would, because duh, it's your story, not theirs. No offense to those who have asked to do it; I just don't believe anyone else can a write a story that someone else wrote because they don't have the mind of that person. It's what makes each writer's work special. On the other hand, I know your Christianity is important, and I believe it's good to uphold that belief. Now, let me make the compromise between the two. Finish your story, every day telling God you're not working against him in what you write, but that your heart is telling you to finish something you put yourself into. I have a good feeling that God, being the all-forgiving person he is, will understand your need to finish it, as long as you tell him how much you love and respect him when you pray. After you finish it, you can promise god you will never write those sort of stories again, so you can be a better follower. And if you choose to do so, then I completely understand. That's just my two cents as a pastor's daughter. Take it as you will.
| Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 11:45 CDT
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You know, I'll say this to you; I was kind of pissed when you said that you're not going to continue, but I respect your choice. What I want to say may sound a bit cliche, but it's true, and it helped me make hard decisions. Just follow your heart. If you want to continue this story, then you should. For example, I was brought up Christian, but when I came to Canada, a lot of my previous views were thrown into the big twister. I also stragled with myself, when I figured out that I'm bi. It wasn't a very nice period of my life, but I came through. Then I went to a christian high school, and after I told some of my new friends who I really was, they accepted me, but school wanted to throw me out. Why am I telling you this? Simple. It doesn't matter what religion you take on. It never truly matters. It's something that helps you along in life, something to support your faith on. But it doesn't dictate, what kind of person you are, and what you like... Jeez, I'm rambling, aren't I? But seriously, I would be very happy if you decided to continue, but that is your choice to make. ^^ Now, I hope, that you enjoyed my little rant.^^;
| Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:04 CDT
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I'm so sorry that you're discontinuing the series, but I suppose I can understand your belief and hard faith in God. My father is a minister, and so I guess perhaps I'm sinning, too. It's just...I believe the Bible gives so many...hypocritical statements that I doubt its legitimacy at times. But I will honor your belief and hope you can be a stronger believer than me. Take care and we will miss your work dearly. ~Hells_gatekepper
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