| "Descent" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Title: review up to chap.2
Reviewed By: Meyham On: July 04, 2007 19:12 EDT
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Yay! You're against using Japanese in English fics, too! I'm loving you more by the day. Also, as for the legal age thing, the legal age in Japan at least (don't know about Amestris!)is thirteen. Heck, Ed was legal from the get go!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing once again, Thanks for another great chapter! This EdxRoy story line is incredibly wonderful and I don't know how much longer I can go with waiting for them to see eachother and fix things (which I really, really, really hope they do). The chess analogy is genius, and is completely believable as advice from Roy. The dream sequence, was sad, its always sad to see Ed cry over Roy....but hopefully now Ed has a better idea of how to solve things and regain control of the situation.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 10:04 EDT
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It's cool to see more of this story every once in a while. On top of that, the story gets more and more strategic. Still, include the pawn can change to other pieces rule, like a pawn can become a queen, at the other end of the board. Usually an endgame move, the most useful piece is the one that is seemingly the most useless. Neh. Otherwise, the story is going great, please update soon. Later
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 02:16 EDT
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i feel so bad for ed. this chapter was really good. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: And It Keeps getting Better!
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter after chapter you continue to present this story wonderfully through your writing. I look forward towards a wonderful next chapter. This one presented so much information, but did so wonderfully, and in an organized fashion as to not confuse or bore the reader! Keep writing in this great style! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (And Breda was constructed believably)!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:59 EDT
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im sooo glad u updated. i love this story. this chapter was good. & roy cant be dead! ne ways update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Vanyali07 On: May 28, 2007 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i've actually just started reading your fanfic, but i decided to wait till i finished to review O.o but now i'll just review as you update. anyways i really love your story! its awesome and i cant wait for the next chapter! poor ed! i feel so sorry for him and after everything he's been through =P anyways just wanted to let you kno how much i liked it and definitely a fave!
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Reviewed By: pandiink On: May 25, 2007 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm probably one of your biggest fans now!! I totally check every week to see if you update! I'm very much in love with your writing and this story~ it seems realistic and just incredibly well thought out. Keep it going cuz your definitely rockin'! Much love and loyalty, pandiink
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 05:42 EDT
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I'm so glad you updated! I truely do love this story. Thanks for keeping up the good work!
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Reviewed By: new_moongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! you killed roy! you cant kill roy! its not allowed! ;_; my roy-toy! *sob*sob* poor roy...poor ed. well, the next cahpter will be interesting huh?
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Title: The Cerulean Alchemist
Reviewed By: The Cerulean Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would've given you an 11 for overall rating, but it wouldn't let me. I think this is one of the best written fics I've read in a VERY long time. The storyline is original, the characters are extensions of their manga/anime selves, it's descrptive without being wordy...it's wonderful. I've been following this fic since you started it, and the next chapters never seem to come fast enough. Bravo for not falling to the classic fluff story lines and cheesy one liners. This story is magic. much love, The Cerulean Alchemist
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 02:25 EDT
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this story is getting really good! i really, really, really look forward 2 reading more. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: flame_alchemist_lover101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's getting good and sad at the same time. I can't wait until the next chapter comes.
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...interesting, very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter...I don't honestly know where this is going to go from here.
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 19:09 EDT
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Thanks for updating on my birthday =) Now I'll go cry with cloverfire. have fun in Idaho
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