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Reviewed By: (I don't have one) On: December 26, 2006 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying the story so far. You're writing is very good, and I can't wait to see more. I was re-reading a couple of the RoyxEd chapters and some of them really reminded me of the song Wake up by Three days grace. Maybe it's just me, but I saw some definite similarities between their relationship in this and that song. Well, anyway, you're doing a fantastic job, and I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 20:23 EST
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Oy ve! so much drama! When's there gonna be more Al/Winry fluff?
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 16:40 EST
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good chapter. this is probably the best fic ive read in a while. keep up the good work & update soon.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 22:18 EST
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this is really interesting. the last chapter was a bit boring tho. since ed & roy werent in it. lol. anyways, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus(lazy right now) On: October 22, 2006 22:14 EDT
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I don't know if its just me, or you're writing it, but Roy seems a little...off with Ed. Ever since that night where they got drunk. Which is not OCCness to me, if thats what your thinking, just a good idea to have Ed run away, see his bro, get kidnapped, and then have Roy make it up to him. ^_~ And now you have me really intreged by Russel and Fletcher. They have never been my favorites (I'm more of a Barry fan) but they are open for a lot of stories.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 23:56 EDT
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omg Ed in a uniform! *squee* Wonderful writing like always!~
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 19:36 EDT
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omc this is such a great story! i love AL and his kitty. Roy was so mean though why you do this Roy whats wrong with you eh? sorry sorry kina went off there but i love the story
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 11:07 EDT
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OOh what a chapter. Al and Winry were so cute together. Al sneeking a kitten in was great. Even though he is older he hasn't changed huh? LOL. And he even got to kiss Winry and take care of CinCin...*snickers* Roy was a bit protective and jealous acting at first in that chapter, not wanting Ed to smoke and the fact they were Havoc's smokes seemed to make him even madder. Loved the drinking game *cough. . . played that one a few times myself* That last part though, me believes Roy has fucked up something terrible. Poor Ed he had to be so scared and upset after that. *Smacks Roy upside the head* What were you thinking Roy? Don't scare the boy like that! Are you so angry at Havoc that you'd take it out on Ed? Boy I can only imagine what the next day is going to be like between those two. Keep up the great work, now I'm all caught up with your stories I'm so happy.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 10:58 EDT
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So now Ed has taken up smoking huh? This chapter was a little sad, the part about the man's family and the war. Well I guess I don't total dislike him now. It was nice to see some other interaction between Roy, Ed and the other members at the office.
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Reviewed By: Queenphoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I had no idea you wrote this! I love this story - sorry I don't review it though. I hate the review function on this site. It's evil. I still haven't really figured out how it works. I'm babbling, aren't I. I'll shut up now...
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Reviewed By: cryogenia On: September 17, 2006 07:38 EDT
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Fantastic! This plot has got me more and more sucked in *_* Do you have this on LJ anywhere? I'd love to stalk the fic there XD I must admit this fic is the only reason I even come to MediaMiner anymore XD
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 23:57 EDT
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Well, it took me a while to noticed you updated. ^_^ I've read Chapter 19 on FanFiction.net, and I gotta say, for someone who's never had a cigarette before that was a very accuarate description. For some reason, I always have little images of Ed as a smoker, though I never actually want him to be one because it would take away from his character and it wouldn't be so in character (but I liked how you did it.). I blame this little somking obsession on our culture and too much Cowboy Bebop and Quentin Tarantino. =D Anyway, I love the story so far and I can't wait to see when you've updated next.
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 02:28 EDT
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This is extra good! I love it! You're so much better at FullMetal Fan fics than me...sulk sulk. But I dont care! This is great! Keep writing! Please dont keep all your loyal fans waiting!
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Reviewed By: Arbitrary Doom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 00:09 EDT
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.....awsome story!.....good charicter development........but the question of what Ed gave up is killing me.......as well as the thing about the jacket and the pants not fiting......its all very interusting......keep up the good work..........XP!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: catmoongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 00:07 EDT
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Oooh, don't leave me hanging! I don't want Mustang to get snuffed! Gah! Such a short chapter, but my mind is reeling! I can't wait for the next chapter, just reading your fanfiction fills me with enough inspiration to continue work on my own. Great job once again with emotional portrayal. I do hope you work with Roland more. His character seems very flat, but promising. I'm very interested to see what he turns into.
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