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| "Descent" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: jinxedchimaera@yahoo.com On: January 19, 2012 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally love this story, and unfortunately, as I've caught onto FMA a few years late, almost no one updates their stories anymore. I really enoyed this fic, and I'm sorry to see that it hasn't been updated in a long time. We'll never know if Mustang survived :( But again, I very much so enjoyed this fic, and maybe someday you'll come back and post the rest of it. One of my favorite authors on the site, and one of my favorite fics from said author. Kudos to everything :) Come back and updateee! >.> haha | Reviewed By: HiWayXingFrog On: November 02, 2009 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I discovered this fic about a week ago and am now completely caught up. I'm thoroughly enjoying it so far. It's extremely rare for me to give any fics 10's across the board, especially when it's an anime I'm ridiculously well-versed in, so kudos to you. Your characterization is excellent. That was a brilliant direction to take with Al's soul-transference ability, and I definitely look forward to seeing where you go with it, and the story as a whole. PS. Gotta say, I cracked up at the end of chapter 43. "I thought it was supposed to last longer..." I practically felt any masculine pride Al might have had shatter, but I laughed just the same XD
| Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 23:54 EDT
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curiouser and curiouser. My daughter recommended this fic to me - interesting - I am very interested in seeing where you are going with this. I anticipate conflict between Al and Ed where they surprise each other by being on opposite sides. Also will Ed go to Winry's rescue and make his peace with her as Al's wife?
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 09:58 EDT
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OMG OMG OMG...Amazing FMA story and I hope to read an update soon...I cant wait to see what you are going to do with it all XD
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 20:35 EDT
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So as reminders of our interest, should we start firing rockets in your general direction? I would consider that an, interesting way to show support, heh. Seriously though, the story still rocks, though keeping track of things is getting pretty hard, since it's been so long since an update, though that's not your fault either. It's just hard to keep track of a long story, and worse still on a well written and complex story. So, what can you do? Just continue to update and I'll review when I can. So, WRITE MORE DAMNIT!!! Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 22:09 EST
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Take into account, Amesteris, not Germany. The Catholic church, and most of religion, hadn't really existed in centuries. So, the wedding vows might not be the same. It is a point to make, at least in the rewrites. On the other hand, some ideas are universal, and wedding vows have remained pretty consistent over the last few centuries. Neh. I hoped for a longer update, but this is pretty good, just update again soon, will ya? Look forward to your next update, and I hope to see it soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 17:57 EST
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Hmmm, interesting update. Neh, update again soon, hopefully Al will be bale to talk to Ed, and maybe be able to swing things. Neh. Update soon,l ja ne.
| Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. Everytime I think I have something figured out, another twist throws is all off balance again! It's wonderfully written, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated. The story got a bit uncomfortable in the last chapter and now that seems to be starting to resolve. **sigh** not that that is a bad thing, really it means that you're a good writer and that I am overly anxious. Even so the polt continues to thicken... I can't wait to see where this leads. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 07:45 EDT
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Thanks for the update, it's cool to see more of this story, which gets more fascinating with every new chapter. Still, Ed has a lot to work out, but seeing Kain should give him the insight to grow up a little more each time he see him, sorta like Roy does with Hughes in the anime/manga. Even if they act silly, they would remind each other of their responsibilities, and what they really had to do. Kain could have the same role for Ed, maybe Mustang too, when he gets back on his feet. Neh, I'm all out of ideas for now, so I'll check back when your next chapter comes out. Later
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 04:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read though the story form the beginning and I am impressed. I like how you handled developing Bereda's character It does seem to fit well with what little we know of him and it seemed separate enough from the other characters. I am not sure if I would have handled Havoc that way, but the more I think about it the more it fits. I also think that Hawkeye would have gotten to the point about why she didn't tell Ed before he stormed off about what Mustang said that night, but considering her emotional state and the fact that I was unsure of the setting of that particular conversation, there might be a reason that she didn't say so.
| Reviewed By: TheFroggy On: August 29, 2007 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, this one is my favorite. I can't wait for an update.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 22:20 EDT
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Gah! What mess has Ed gotten into now! Mostly like the goofy kind that you can never wash out of a shirt...sounds like Ed. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: TheAngelIsrafel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and I hope you keep writing I know you are a busy author seeing as you have multiple stories that are all so wonderful. Keep up the wonderful work and try to update once in a while. You happen to be the only person with a story that is in excess of 300 pages other then my own, heh-heh makes me feel bad for having new time readers click on it now( Like me for you), but at the same time I love how long this is. Keep it up ~ Israfel ~
| Reviewed By: genki_blu On: August 01, 2007 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely one of the better fanfics I have read in a loooong time. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your updates!
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