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| "Blizzard" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mic123 On: October 06, 2017 04:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor kei indeed, loved the ride
| Reviewed By: Ashe626 On: December 07, 2011 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one sick and twisted fuck and I love you for it. | Title: Good Stuff
Reviewed By: Kumorigoe On: October 07, 2010 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a perverse talent for writing stories that have uncomfortable situations, and yet they are stories that beg to be finished. I can only strive to bring the same talent to my own works. I would be honored if you would consider being a pre-reader for me on my own Love Hina story.
| Title: Carbon Copy of Basic Instinct
Reviewed By: A fan of your work.... On: February 17, 2008 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this fic is really great and all but... it basically like Basic Instincts 2 or is it 1. anyways dude you did a good job with the fic overall. And it's kinda sad how no one knows what this fic is based on a Movie.
| Reviewed By: Lord Mordred On: August 17, 2007 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the most fantastic pieces of fan fiction I have ever seen! I started reading this and was thinking that this was just another love hina erotic stories, but this was far from it!
| Reviewed By: Guy Montag On: June 13, 2007 02:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is...LOL
| Title: idea bouncing in my mind?
Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic been really nice to read dark-ish sometimes but that made it way more interesting now, after reading this chapter there is an idea "bouncing" in my mind about Keitaro finally reacting to Motoko having his reactoin as well as his way with her in a way fashioned like it was in this fic having after it she asking him to "spar" with her many more times, maybe even growing addicted to it and keitaro going from his normal way of thinking to a wild and dark one, then back, as time goes by well... that's kind of my idea it's haqrder to explain it as english isn't my birth language or my country language (but it won't stop me from reading and reviewing in english the best i can) well.... see ya!
| Reviewed By: vapor22 On: September 03, 2006 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is batshit insane! i love it!
| Reviewed By: Shadowed Moon On: August 27, 2006 03:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I actually wasn't planning to leave a review. But somehow, it felt wrong not to. Minutely because of the little note you left in the last chapter, and majorly because goddamn, that was a hell of a story. It was twisted in all the wrong and right places, well, it was twisted everywhere. Honestly, it was like a beautiful, horrific train wreck, with an ending as abrupt and horrifying as the rest of the damn thing. If you're wondering why I only gave a 7 as my Overall, it's because, well... I wanted a happy ending, it's just who I am, so don't take offense to it. Oh, and I noticed the differences between your lemon style now and how it was back in "Loss and Redemption". Now, I like Loss & Redemption, but I feel that Rx7, the king of smut writing, has had a good influence in your lemon style, and I sincerely hope he still influences you in the future. As a leaving not, I do hope that the next piece I read for you will be as exquisitely done, without the whole "horrific train" wreck factor to it.
| Title: Anime fan, HP fanfic writer
Reviewed By: Mrriddler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent piece of work. Like Random/Rx7, you are definitely one of the top Love Hina/anime fanwriters out there. Ingenous, creative and filled with wonderful character interactions that make readers laugh, cry and think. The characterization of your characters were, I have to say, pretty amazing. Given how normatively insane and seemingly unrealistic their actions were, it is rather amazing how you created a cohert and rational story. I doubt if there's even a handful of authors in fandom that can pull something like this off without dulving excessively into an emo/angst fest. Kudos to you for pulling it off. Admittingly, some people might take issue with the dark, semi-gothic/emo themes and endings you have going for some of your stories; I know Rx7 got slammed, most unfairly, for his Shinobi goes psycho "horror" fic. (and dare I wonder if that specific didn't at least partly influence this story?) Personally, I don't really know what to make of the ending for this story. Unfulfilling and ironic might be words that I would use. But then, I guess it's nice that your story doesn't have a rosy fairy tale ending with protagonist living happily ever after with all his girls in the vain of classic anime romance comedies. Anyway, I'll cease my rambling. Just want to add that I do hope that you'll make available more of the results of your great talent in the future. It's always a pleasure reading one of your works. Cheers.
| Title: One of the best fics I've read!
Reviewed By: angelicdhampir2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say this is probably the deepest love hina lemon ever. I could honestly see something like this happening to Keitaro. The characterization was spot on, and every thing else was executed with such skill, I became fully immersed. It was a pleasure, reading this story.
| Reviewed By: Reinjuuken On: July 26, 2006 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply one of the best you've written. I've been reading your work for quite a while now, particularly your Kei-kunxMo-chan fics. This one is in a diferrent direction, but still a great experience. Well, it can be classified as a psychological drama, with Keitaro destroying himself and all. Can't blame his gentle nature, but still, Yuki's madness is something unexpected as well. Once again, great concept. A+++++++ ~reinjuuken@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Mercaba On: July 23, 2006 17:21 PDT
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Man Kei can't get a break can he.
| Reviewed By: AGX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 03:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was interesting... kinda feel sorry dat keitaro snapped in the end... oh... um... yeah... kinda wanted to know when u would update your fanfiction.net stories... i review as AegisX there, so i just wanna know... yeah... sorry for bothering u and gread story...
| Reviewed By: Gus Bus On: July 22, 2006 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics are awesome!
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