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Reviewed By: denisud On: July 19, 2006 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about getting screwed litterally and figuratively. I think you got some inspiration from a writer we both know huh! ;-) Great job of writing, and I would continue with theat writer's influence and write a comedy or romance after such an angst filled story! dennisud
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Reviewed By: runestar On: July 19, 2006 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I have a feeling that poor Keitaro will be stuck there for a very long time? Though I was wondering how you would handle the rest of the tenants - how they would deal with the issue etc. Never mind, I can always bug you for more details at thefanfiction forums...:D
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Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 03:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. That was... the WTF meter just blew up. And poor bastard... geting stuck in the hospital the exact person who drove him mad was in. And HEH to the NGE reference. It does explain why Shinji is so screwed up...
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 01:46 PDT
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Whoa. That was... whoa! Poor Keitaro. Going to spend the rest of his life hold there? Whoa. I knew this story was going to be dark by what was happening to Keitaro, and to what Yuki was doing to him. But I truely did not expect that ending! I was thinking death. Heck, when Keitaro callapsed, I was thinking he was dead, or at least serverly injured. But then, in a way, what he got? Might be worse than death. Ooooo. Can't wait to hear some of the other people's reaction on this one!
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Reviewed By: SAnSa On: July 16, 2006 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! great work, i wonder how did you get this idea, its just some of the best love hina fics i have read (aside from ships) i dont know if u plan to have keitaro f##k all the girls or just keep it to yuki and motoko(i prefer t 2ond motoko is my favorite caracter XD) pls update soon
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Reviewed By: Sick On: July 15, 2006 23:38 PDT
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I just thought up this crazy idea when I was thinking about how Yuki, and Motoko were smiling at him... What if the girls planned this to Keitaro? o.O Turn Keitaro into the secks god! ;) innocent Shinobu isn't so innocent! lol... yeah I know stupid but it's crazy and weird and completely twisted
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 19:18 PDT
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This is great really great. Now I wonder how long Keitaro will stay in that alley. Or if he'll get around to fixing that sqeak in Motoko's room. but how long can he keep this up without someone noticing. Either way Keitaro needs to fuck someone in the ass.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 11:37 PDT
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nicely done
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Reviewed By: Drool On: July 15, 2006 07:05 PDT
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Holy shit! It looks like Motoko is somewhat like Yuki, she wants more Kei-lovin'! This is definitely the greatest fic evar!(a intended) Dark fics always add some of the best depth to any story, and with continuous updates like this, dark fics probably have the most flexibility since you can get insipiration from nearly anything! ^^ I love you... marry my! Unless you're a guy... that would just be weird.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 23:33 PDT
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This just gets creepier and creepier... good job.
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:56 PDT
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Oh boy. Looks like the road to darkness is nearing an end. What will happen to Keitaro? Motoko? Yuki? Obviously Yuki likes it the S&M way but... if this continues, Keitaro might not hold back the next time. Ooooo. If that happens...
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 10:27 PDT
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Nicely dark, I like it.
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Reviewed By: DB Waflless On: July 09, 2006 18:52 PDT
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Wow I hadn't realized you wrote this until the end, kinda feel dumb as a fan of your work, this seem interesting, but I'm still waiting on the aftermath fan fic, I miss that one :(
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Reviewed By: Drool On: July 07, 2006 20:05 PDT
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So... here I am drooling... again. I can only wonder how this will play out. It's evolved from a perfect oneshot into an incredibly immersive and enthralling story. This is something I definitely want to see play out, I'm sure it'll be glorius.
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Reviewed By: denisud On: July 07, 2006 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have grave misgivngs here. Will Keitaro commit Seppiku? Or will Motoko while tailing him see how Yuki manipulates him to go crazy and maybe finds a kindaer side to him and helps him with stopping Yuki? One can only hope! I can't bare to think if he goes off on Shinobu! dennisud
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