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Reviewed By: J Erosion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it was vile.... and it was good. Love Hina rarely sees ficts like this. So it beg the question of wither or not you are willing to continue this, if anything he, Keitaro, has to explain the broken bottles in Kitsune's room. And more sex would be bad either
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Reviewed By: Fatuous One On: June 26, 2006 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, well. As always, your writing is very involving. The story was also unexpected; I was thinking that it might end up as some sort of 'affair' scenario instead of a faux-rape one. Your characterization of Shinobu's mother was extremely interesting. Like Toshio, she's very human, however, unlike Toshio, she seemingly has very few positive qualities. An interesting blend, one that you don't often see without some sort of bias of a character. That said, while the story itself was excellent, the sex didn't greatly interest me. I'm not sure as to your intention with the fic, but it wasn't very good as 'smut'. Regardless, I enjoyed it. And I very much hope that you continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: ?! On: June 26, 2006 09:35 PDT
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!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!? !??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!??!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!??!!?!??!!??!!?!?!!?!??!?!?!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................was not expecting that.
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Reviewed By: Sieg_15 On: June 26, 2006 09:26 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Keitaro and Tsuroko pairings aren't that too far-fetched but Shinobu's mom? A woman we've barely seen and know little to nothing of? Wow. And yet it turned out good enough for me to want to read another chapter? YES! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unentschieden On: June 26, 2006 04:06 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Highly interesting this Story has a lot of "aftermath" Potential I hope you are going to continue it.
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 22:56 PDT
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Woohoo! Another awesome story by you! As for 'The End' or 'To Be Continued', I can see it work both ways. Me? I prefer 'To Be Continued'. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Webdog On: June 25, 2006 22:36 PDT
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wow man. after the keitaro/tsuroko pairing i thought i had seen it all. you have a way with suprises. i would really like to see this continued. i mean, i can ALMOST imagine the reaction of everybody. nice job man.
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