| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: half-inu kagome On: November 14, 2006 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stoury was absolutely great ive jus got thro readin the first 2 parts of it and jus finished reading it to day how do u join IYFG,because i would like to vote for this book it deserve to win thank you 4 writting this book it brought meaning to my boring life (boy i wish i had an old well in my back yard may be my world wouldnt be so dull):)
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 17:41 EST
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its another chappter does happy dance lalala cant wait till the next one sends writing vibes
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSi On: November 13, 2006 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipppeeee!! Squeals with much Joy and Happiness!! Another delightful chapter or two!! I'm going for a two for this time!! Try to get chapters 13 and 14 together!! Hooray, Literary Goddess has more chapters posted!! Yay!! So here we go starting off with Chapter 13: Ah so that is why Mama Higurashi was there watching Kagome and Inuyasha. She had to let them know they have company and can't indulge this time. Nice!! A very smooth transition into the next chapter from the previous one! Awesome work! Oh wow... I think Eri better watch her step around Kagome for quite a while. If she can throw a Tai Youkai onto his butt I dread... nah... I would love to see what she is going to do with Eri when she gets a hold of that Wench. Hmmm..., I wonder why her friends came over as well? I'm feeling a little nervous about what they are planning to do to Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope they aren't going to hurt them. I do like the conservation they were having while waiting for Kagome and Inuyasha. I did choke a little on a laugh when they made the comment about the size of a guys package... I like how you keep all the characters so true to the way Rumiko has written them! Kagome's manners are so refreshing to see and read! Love it! Oh dear Kagome's friends also want to talk to Inuyasha! GRRR! I can't believe Ayumi did that to Inuyasha and Kagome!! That was totally uncalled for!! Grrr!! The rudeness!! Why would she be so uncaring of Kagome's and Inuyasha's privacy and feelings!! (Nikkie is rather annoyed right now at the rude behaviour of her friends!) I hope Kagome will let her friends know that was uncalled for! I hope she won't let Ayumi get away with it!! Inuyasha is not going to be comfortable nor is this going to help his self image! Nice to state that comment. I still can't believe the lack of respect they have shown for Inuyasha and Kagome! Why could they have just asked and then insisted for the truth instead resorting to this awful stunt!! Okay, okay... I am still grumbling about it. Darn it!! You write so Beautifully!! You have me having a fit over that scene! A sure sign of a Excellent and Amazingly Gifted Writer!! To be able to involve the reader, draw them into the story and merge them so well that they can physically respond to any scene that is written and read!! Wonderful!! Amazing!! Kudos!! Kudos!! Bravo!! Poor Inu ears getting blasted so from Yuka's squealing! Argh! I can't believe she is going to let them get away with it!! I would have expected at least a reprimand! After all Kagome went after Eri. But then Kagome does tend not to defend Inuyasha at times when she really should. Argh! Still not happy at their behaviour! Grumbles! I hope Kagome gets them to swear an oath not to tell anyone! I can't believe they are prying... or maybe it is nosy?... about Kagome's and Inuyasha's private life! Hummph! They are acting similar to Miroku! Chuckles... everyone is out to get his ears... I really liked the way Inuyasha said they could touch his ears only once, and making that firm. Love this story!! Can you tell...? Love it!! And I love that Inuyasha was able to show Kagome affection so openly and in front of her friends from the future!! Amazing writing!! Bravo! Bravissimo!! Sweet!! I chuckled at Inuyasha whispering to Kagome that if she didn't stop rubbing his ears they would be giving her friends a show! So very cute of him! I wonder if Inuyasha will question Kagome's comment of "..they will take him away.." and why it worries her so much? Would he brag that he can't be caught? I wonder if Kagome would explain to Inuyasha the cruelties that Scientists would bestow upon him? I love !Love!! how Inuyasha after eating excused himself to go help out Jii-chan around the shrine! That was also so very touching!! Can't wait to see more!! Sweet and touching when Kagome went out to thank Inuyasha for behaving himself! I am gushing over the maturity Inuyasha had displayed by going to Jii-chan and asking him to perform the marriage cermony!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 08:29 EST
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You are amazing! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:40 EST
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you love an evil cliffie don't you? i have to say i love the 'in the well' lemon. wonderfully intense and perfect for the two's personalites. and inuyasha as a panty theif, who would have guessed. at least kagome wasn't too upset about it but damn, what a sneaky hanyou. naraku is gonna have a hard lesson in sending cronies to do his own work when he finds out that no one was trying to kill each other (athough kouga may still do something stupid to get his ass kicked. i'm not sure how well he's dealing. he may accept their mating but i don't think he's happy about it.) and myouga...yeah, press inuyasha when he's boardering on a full demn. bright flea. i awlways thought there was more to totosai than he let on and you're showing it wonderfully. i can't wait to see what he designs for them in both the future and the past. and if sesshomaru decides to make his future debut when the rings and necklace are presented to them. poor shippou...still such a child. rin will be good for him. and kaede will be good for sesshomaru...not like that!!! she's good in that she can read him and is not afraid to talk to him like he is simply one of her 'grandchildren' like she treats the rest of the group. i can't wait to see where this goes!
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Title: LOVIN IT!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I LOVE THIS FAN FIC! I LOVE THE SQUELS ALSO! THIS IS JUST THE BEST THING EVER! SO HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THE IDEA OF THE RINGS GLOWING PINK? AND I LOVED THE PART WHERE YOU WROTE HOW KIKYO GOT PUSHED ON HER ASS. I JUST WISH THAT COULD'VE HAPPENED IN THE SERIES. WELL UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Hell yeah!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anything good when Kikyou is getting her as kicked (sorry kikyou lovers push off) land her undead no good bad smelling to my inu pain in the hum on her ass!!!! Yeah! pumping my fist in the air laughing crazy hum anyhoo! I'm better now. this is such a cool chapter GO INU TAKE CONTROL YEAH! I'll think I'll leave this off with a I love this chapter please write more (update soon or I'll come to your house) Um! that wasn't me who said that. I swear muttering stupid evil twin always gets me in trouble. update soon plz
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Title: She Finally got what was coming...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, an author that had the jewels to give Kikyou, what she really deserves...a good dusting off the edges, 'cause dust can really stick to clay neh? by the way didnt her azz crack? LOL Ok then, on to constructive reviewing, I love your work, i love that you put the characters in such different situations, and angst the hell out of them and then make it all better, (se inuyasha as example? aint it alot better than phone sex? Really feeling emotions oh yes)...LOL I admire you and will be looking out for voting period on the IYFG!!! Hugs & Kisses Pinkit-chan!
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Reviewed By: Inukgluvr On: November 04, 2006 19:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This is like one of the BEST fanfics i have ever read. I was hooked from the first one. U HAVE to continue, soon! Pretty please? NOW! I'll be waiting, so HURRY! Don't 4get it was gr8 and i luved it.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 14:23 EST
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ah, poetic justice of kikyou getting knocked on her ass by kagome. proves the walking undead doesn't know everything. and telepathic sex...i don't think i've seen that one yet, and so nicely done. silly myoga (at least inuyasha would have had a hard time slapping him if he would have tried to steal some blood). i'm excited to see how the rings will enhance their growing powers since the two seem to have managed to breech distance now that they really needed to. will kohaku come to sango? how will she react since she has been so emotionally up and down anyway? will we get a happy reunion moment with inuyasha and kagome or will one of the 'testers' (*cough* kikyou) try and pulll a surprise test of some sort and thoroughly piss them off! i always look forward to more (that's what a minion is for)!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! yay! kikyou got knocked on her butt! THAT made me happy! another great chapter!
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Title: update sooooonnn!!!
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and i cant wait 2 see wat happens nxt....yet another amazing chapter ^_^....keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 10:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo you updated!!! does happy dance lalala ;p this is ooone of the best fanfics ever for !!! update soon (by the way i love sess/rin pairing so can you put some of that in there i dont know how so if you cant alls good) love your fanfic sends writing vibes
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 16:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update update update update update update update update very soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was good but Kagome's mom is her grandfatherl's actual daughter, not daughter-in-law...at im pretty sure. other than that it's GREAT!!! update soon plz!!! ~shigome a.k.a. dark irish sorceress
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