| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this fic, but these two latest chapters... They are very well written, but I don't really think they fit into the story as it is. I think you should make them a one-shot beside the main story. Some of the events could appear as flashbacks, perhaps, but two long chapters with them? Hmm... And Naraku? (I assume he's the guy in the baboon pelt) I'm assuming you are changing some of the canon parts, as he wasn't really "created" until Inuyasha was adult and had met Kikyo. But if you can find a good way to tie this all together, then I'm pleased. :) Aaah, can't it be the new moon soon? >:D I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: dark_fairy_danica On: March 14, 2007 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far and cannot wait to read more, when will you post a new chapter? By the way I loved this chapter, it certainly explained a lot about sesshomaru and how kind Izayaoi tried to be to sesshomaru and how poorly his own mother treated him. Keep up with the good work!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: February 22, 2007 19:07 EST
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ai really like this chapter...I like getting insight into Sess's past
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 19:28 EST
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Vry nice. That chapter explained a lot. It really DID seem like Inu Tashio was being unreasonable towards Sesshoumaru, but he did explain his reasoning for his actions. Sad that Izyaoi got the taiyoukai killed in an effort to spare Sess more punishment, which would have come because of her complaints. For someone who knew how to work her husband so well, she was sadly off base that time. Such a sad, but interesting situation among the brothers -- each jealous of the other for such different reasons. And Naraku contacted Haru all those years ago? But wasn't Naraku a product of Onigumo and many demons only after Inuyasha met Kikyou? Love the length and detail of your chapters. You're doing such an excellent job with this story. I was so happy to see a new chapter posted!
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: February 19, 2007 15:33 EST
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this is atotally great story please up date very soon i really want to read more!!
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Reviewed By: Nina Angeles [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 17:29 EST
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please update it's really good
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the character you come up with and this plot is awesome! *nods* Keep up the great work, you have a new fan! :P
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 19:16 EST
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I love the new chapter! I can't wait for the update...I like the little look into Sess's past...but what would make Inu and Sess not like each other!
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 22:07 EST
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cant wait for the next chapter! I love it! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 20:15 EST
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Nice job! I love this insight into Sesshoumaru's formative years, and it also gives us a glimpse of Haru as a young boy, er, demon. I understand comepletely what you're saying about knowing where you want to go with this and having a little trouble getting there. But, I'll be sticking with you and it for as long as it takes, because this is excellent. Very enjoyable and entertaining. I hope you'll be able to write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Strawberry22_17 On: January 08, 2007 21:01 EST
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You have a great story going and Im sad that you havent updated yet. Hopefully we'll see a new chapter soon! Keep up the great work, because I'd hate to see another great story left unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 16:38 EST
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Cant wait to see what happens! I bet Kagome would LOVE Rin! I mean shes a doll! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: December 09, 2006 13:43 EST
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caudle is actually spelled CODDLE. Interesting story, I like Haru.
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Reviewed By: Ice VixenX (nsi) On: December 08, 2006 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have renewed my faith in this web site. I was beginning to think i have already read all of the really good fan fics. Well keep up the good work and update soon. I can't wait... ^_~
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 22:52 EST
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So cute...holding pinkies...Update soon...pweety pweese
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