| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame(not in) On: May 20, 2007 00:26 EDT
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oi....you went and made haru evil? but he was my favorite of the full bloods!!O_O...ohh....but this is ssooooo gooood!I dont think that Haru should be bound to Naraku just cause he made a deal with the dude...i forgot his name...oh well...but i guess it does make sence. It does.oi...still.....haru....evil...?ah well...such is life.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story just seems to be getting better, i love the several intricate plots going on in the story, really does peak my interest. i also enjoyed the two chapters (And now for something completely different p1 & p2) as well, it was nice to read parts of sess and inu's past with their father and the court especially the interaction with inu's mother.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved! although I feel bad for inuyasha...I mean I don't mind kagome/sesshy pairing, but I do prefer inu/kag.. But I still love this story reguardless.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 12:20 EDT
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up date soon!!ja ne!!i really like it soo far but i'm a bit confused with the pain part of the treatment what is it for?
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Reviewed By: winter's mistres On: May 19, 2007 11:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 10:35 EDT
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YOu didn't say it was naraku? But haru did? I'm slightly confused. Unless he plans to bring himself back with Kagome's help? I can't believe that Haru would betray her like that. I'm hoping he'll tell his brother before it is too late...
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 06:25 EDT
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Yeah! New chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 05:31 EDT
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Fabulous chapter! Loved the return of the intrigue with Haru -- I'd forgotten all about that. I'm wondering, what are Inuyasha's plans and intentions towards Kagome? If Sesshoumaru isn't going to take her as his mate, he still can. Is he planning to stay with her at this house Sesshoumaru is having built? He certainly still seems to care. But, whoa! What was that stray thought of kagome's that Shippou was the only male who was probably a virgin? Who the heck does she think Inuyasha's been with? As a hanyou, he's pretty much an outcast -- not a desireable partner for a youkai, and humans sure don't want to have anything to do with him. And Kikyou was certainly too cold and reserved to do something so earthy, even when she was alive. She wanted a human man to be with. And yikes! Does Sesshoumaru know how painful this process is that Kagome's going through? Cho was checking to see if she was still alive! If he doesn't know, I hope he finds out. We're really into the meaty part of the story now, aren't we? This is awesome! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 03:04 EDT
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Cant wait to read more!! Update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 03:04 EDT
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Cant wait to read more!! Update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:40 EDT
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It was so great to see a new chapter for this!! SO much happened in it, too. Loved the way Kagome stood up for her youkai friends. Interesting little talk she had with Sango -- asking her if she was flitting from one brother to the other. What HAS happened to her feelings for Inuyasha? And what is going on with his feelings for her? You did a beautiful job with the scene of her and Kouga -- just about had me in tears. Poor ookami. And I am dying to know what Sesshoumaru wanted to talk to Inuyasha about when they trailed behind the group. Inuyasha has been acting a little strange -- getting so embarrassed all the time. And I have to wonder, what will Sesshoumaru do when HE actually hears someone say Kagome is his whore? Is he still thiking of sticking to their deal? Or is he considering something more? I can't wait to see what you have in mind to happen next!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 23:11 EDT
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I was wondering how you would end the Koga thing without bloodshed. I really like that. Update soon.....are you going to talk about what the Inu Brothers were talking about?
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Title: good to have you back
Reviewed By: ice Vixen X (nsi) On: May 13, 2007 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a few min. to myself as my mother watches the new baby and thought what the heck i'll take a look and there it was. a new chapter... YAY. Awsmoe. love where the story is going. can't wait till the next ch. Though god knows when i'll get a chance to read it. Take care ...^_~
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 19:45 EDT
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... I'm so interested in where this is going to end up.
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Reviewed By: chickenstrach On: April 08, 2007 18:57 EDT
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so is it over? u can't end it like that
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