| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Title: Awesome as always
Reviewed By: Mikage Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore how you write. I must say that I started reading your fanfic with as much enthusiasm as I am reading each new chapter as soon as you upload them now. Go on writing, please, or I won't be able to sleep thinking of what is going to happen to Sess and Kags!! I support that pairing 100%!! Keep it up! And thanks in the name of all fanfic readers. Works as good as yours keep the standard high!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: October 27, 2007 23:15 EDT
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This chapter is awesome. His mother is kinda witchy though...will that change? or will she threaten Kagome's life and that of the child? Supposing there is a child? hum.... Sorry not signed in tonight...Daydreamer99
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 02:43 EDT
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AH!!! Yay! I loved it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 09:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice to see you haven't given up on this story yet. And you shouldn't ever. I really like it! I love it how their feelings are slowly growing. Can't wait for the new moon! ;)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:58 EDT
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Awe...yay! They kissed! I feel bad for Haru though...is he really going to be a bad guy?
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story today and have read the whole thing till this last chapter and I gotta say I trully like it and cant wait to see more chapters
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 05:23 EDT
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Do you even have to ask that question? We ALL hate you. Stupid cliff hangers...
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Title: more more
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: June 24, 2007 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it but i can wait to see more. and do i here a lemon in the near future. any who keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil...... that is what you are..... so you have to update asap! Please!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 12:14 EDT
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So there seem to be a lot of people after them huh? naraku and Sess's mom. So what now? SHould't she kinda be put to death by Sess for disobeying the Lord of the West? Oooooo I hope so! She's such a total bitch! And as for naraku.....He won't win cause haru has a heart somewhere in there! And it's gonna be Sess that saves her isn't it?! I figured it would be. Not that Inu isnt' capable...but if she is going to change her mind he has to come in as savior somewhere or another.
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Reviewed By: notloggedin,but,madmiko On: June 23, 2007 05:58 EDT
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That was great, as always, but I'm starting to get really sad about what is happening between Inuyasha and Kagome. I have a feeling the rest of this story is going to be difficult to read. (Too much angst makes my gut churn! LOL!!) And you really hit me with it right there at the end with Inuyasha telling her she's switching packs. When his heart clenched, I thought, "Oh, great, -- I'm not going to be able to read this." I love Sess/Kag, but deep down, I still love Inu/Kag, too. So, WILL Inu and gang be stying with her? He's not just going to abandon her there, is he? And I'm still wondering what the plans are for when this is all over -- like I've said before, if Sess isn't taking her as his MATE, what's to stop Inu from it? Other than that. I have to say the whole idea that she might be the reincarnation of Izayoi was interesting, and disturbing. And sad. First she's his dead ex-girlfriend's reincarnation, now she might be his MOTHER'S? EW! Can't she ever just be herself? LOL!! And I couldn't quite tell who all was being targeted for death -- was the other girl they were talking about Sango? Or Kikyou? Because I'm really not interested in seeing her pop up. (Sorry, I have issues with Kikyou since Takahashi-san has let her take over the whole manga -- even after killing her off again. It's so dang-blasted annoying!!) I have to confess, if Inu doesn't get Kagome, (which he won't, since this is Sess/Kag), I'd definitely rather have him remain unattached. I really hate seeing him paired off with Kikyou or anyone else, and it isn't necessary. Not everyone has to come out with a partner in every story. (But that's just me ranting. Ignore it.) Well, you certainly had Cho set up what's about to happen when they reach their destination. Why are they going there? Wouldn't it make more sense for Sess to stay with Kag at the place he's having built, rather than expose her to the dangers of the court? (Oh, yeah -- it's called STORY. LOL!!) I know I can count on you to make it good! I'll be looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fact that Sess is allowing some emotion to show, that Koga and InuYasha are finally accepting that she loves another, but I suspect the person in the shadows is Kikyo.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are getting really interesting. I wonder what will happen to Kagome's body now. Can't wait for your next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: ep On: May 22, 2007 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry hurry hurry hurry!!!!! this is a great story!!
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Title: Coolness
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude!!! I need to know man, I need to know! What happens next? Why did you make Haru bad, I liked him he is my favorite. I cry for poor Haru T-T, I want to lock him in my closet and cuttle him forever and ever... Anyway, love the updates. I've been waiting forever for them. Hope to see more soon, keep up the great writing!
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