| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: KK On: August 01, 2006 01:03 CDT
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Keep updating and do it fast!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: August 01, 2006 00:22 CDT
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Awww... I am glad they are together again!! :o) It's so sweet! I hope things will be okay with Sango and Kagome. Anyways, great job! i can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: BB On: August 01, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! i just want to say that i like your story. I want to say something but it's not a flame. As i said, i like your story, but i find the "bad previous relationships" theme a little ovehyped, if you know what i mean. i personally would have liked it if you had down-played the whole inu slept w/ san thing. but either way, i still liked the chappies. sorry about the 7 in o/c. its nothing personal.
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Title: chap.11
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! Now that she knows.. gah, things are gna be a lot harder...
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: July 29, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i like it a lot =) update soon i look forward to it ^^
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 29, 2006 10:19 CDT
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As sad and heartbreaking as that chapter was, I think chp 11 was your best so far, but make sure you get rid ok Kikyo (Im a Kinky-ho hater, sorry if your not), Oh and make sure you get Sango and Kagome friends and again and have Inu and kag make up and when is Sango and miroku gonna start dating? When is Miroku gonna come into the picture? Anyways I love the story and I want you to go back to your updating like everyday cuz I loved that, your so awsome anyways keep update/writing! Love always your biggest fan
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, why did that bitch have to come and ruin it all! And they where gitting close too. Well hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: whorl On: July 28, 2006 14:32 CDT
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I understand why Kagome left. After seeing your new guy's ex who is almost identical to you, and hearing that he and his best friend used to have sex, just really can be too much for some people especially when it is suddenly thrust upon you. And is it just me or does Sango want to be with Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 13:37 CDT
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I can't beleive you brought in Kikyo! You're evil! (just kidding) I hope Kagome doesn't want to not see Inuyasha anymore because of this. Because that would be stupid on her part. Anyway, great chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 28, 2006 03:36 CDT
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I HATE kikyo... UGH! I wonder if you will bring Kouga into the picture too.. hehe. That would make Inuyasha SO jealous. Anyways, I wonder how Kagome will recover from Sango/Inu news and the whole Kikyo ordeal. Great chapter!! I am eager to keep reading! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: cath On: July 27, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do u know how much i CAN't wait for the next chapter to come up?? well i'll tell you...I CAN'T WAIT AT ALLLLL!!! it was fuking aweomse so please...i'm begging u!!! update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: July 27, 2006 21:44 CDT
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ack... i knew she'd come back! >.< oh well, anyway. Usually I don't hate Kikyo, I guess I'll have to on this fic =P well, update soon... and make Kagome fully understands the situation... I think she always jumps too quickly to conclusions -rolls eyes- lol update soon! =)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: KK On: July 27, 2006 10:34 CDT
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Hi, I want you to update please update, Im dieing here for you to udate, please, please, please updat Im on my knees, just please update Love always your biggest fan
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 25, 2006 21:47 CDT
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Please update, Im dying for you to update, ooo please update, I beg of you Love always your biggest fan!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is she going to do with him? SCREW him dammit, hahahaha. But for real this story is cool and I'm glad that you captured the animalistic lust and attraction that people feel towards each other even if they just met each other. Can't wait to see where the story goes, I know you're lemon is going to be the s**t.
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