| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: gaara252 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 22:03 EST
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AGGGHH! I can't take it anymore! When will Gaara remember!?!?*bangs head against desk* Let him remember soon, or by kami, I will lose it!....Update soon!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 21:30 EST
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I'm gonna lose it waiting for Garra to remember, I just know I am. I'm trying to calm my mind with the fact that he's got a little inkling of a memory of Cassie and that in a couple of chapters he'll remember, but a little more of my sanity diminishes each time I read a chapter where Garra doesn't know how much he and Cassie love each other. Even though this chapter is furthering my mental breakdown, it's still awesome. I can't wait for the next one (especially if Faceless is going to bite the dust in it).
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 19:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic. Though, Gaara is dense, but with amnesia it's expected. I'm reading the Naruto manga after Kakashi Gaiden and I liked Kakashi at first, but the more I read the more arrogant he comes off. Naruto was chasing after an enemy and he says something like I'm a genius like Shikamaru and I developed brilliant new jutsus so you have a chance. blah, blah.
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Reviewed By: Kakashis_luvr On: February 25, 2007 11:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last two chapters tou put up made me cry. but you can really write a good story.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 22:19 EST
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that was just harsh. o well, i still like this chap. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 18:23 EST
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Me: You've got a point there. Gaara: Yeah... BUT SHE MADE ME LOOK LIKE A FUCKIN COLD HEARTED JERK! Me: *pats his head* Calm down. Gaara: What if I don't want to? Me: *gives him THE look* Gaara:O.O I'LL BE GOOD! Me: That's what I thought.
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:37 EST
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roll roll roll ur joint gently down the line take a toke inhale the smoke blow ur friggin mind *peace*
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:31 EST
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am bringing sexy back yea!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:29 EST
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GAARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:16 EST
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lmao!!!!!!!!!!!! TOOTH PATSE IS EVILLLLLLLLLLL LOLS
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:15 EST
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gaara is my honey bun suger plum huggy uggy umpin ur my sweedy pie ur my cuppy cake gum drop sunckum snuckum snork they apple of my eye and i love u so and i want ya do know that ill always be right here and i love to sing those songs to u because U R SO DAREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! gaara: i gotda get outa here
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:10 EST
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preedy cheese preedy cheese
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:02 EST
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oooooooooo lols i got nun to do am going to read back nice chapters i started with the lemon lols
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:01 EST
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hurrrrryyyyyyyyyyy onnnnnnnnnnnnn uppppppppppppppppp and reviewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:01 EST
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that chap was amazing...........but so sad GAARA IS SUCK AN a$$ WITHOUT his memory it hurts to say it but goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i hope he gets it back soon h made cassie cry argggggggggggggggggg
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