| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 23:20 EST
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no no!!!!! why must u stop there *convulses*
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 22:00 EST
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*jaw falls off and stares blankly*....WHAT!?!??!? this is a great chap(except for the pure EVIL in it). please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 13:58 EST
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OMG AWSOME CHAPTER
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Title: Hiei81
Reviewed By: Hiei81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 22:11 EST
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That was kool!! I hope Cassie is beating the shit out of noface!!!..... she is right? lol ok well..... keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like your story!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting. I like it alot.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 21:27 EST
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I noticed you had misspelled a japanese word. Its sumimasen not susimasen. I've started taking Japanese and that's one of the words we learned. Otherwise the 2nd chapter was good.
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Reviewed By: __shadow_dragon__ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What'gonna happen to cassie - chan!?!?! but great tho! keep updatin
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 17:30 EST
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hey keep up the good work!! oh and i got a question!! the little boy that cassie-chan was hold like a mother would, is he her son???? i really want to know!! is she pregnant?? or is she gonna be pregnant and have that boy?? hmm...oh well, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 16:45 EST
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yay!!!! *happy dance*, i love this chap so much. awesome job. please please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 15:53 EST
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I love it. The only reason I'm not really angry about where you ended it is because I pretty much know now that Cassie is going to oust Faceless very soon. And not a minute too soon. This was a really awesome chapter. Hope you post another soon. Very soon.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 10:03 EST
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WEEEEEE!!! Gomen. Randomness. I hope you don't think I'm still pissed at you for groaping Gaara-Chan. He mine! PLEASE UPDATE SOON DAMN IT!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 22:03 EST
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That was the most evil place to end the chap. You absolutely must update soon! Plus, long chaps are always welcome.
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Reviewed By: xXdonutsXx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 21:13 EST
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YAY!!!!! this story is awesomeness!!!! oh and Lee's last name is Rock. it sounds wierd to say Lee Rock ... some stuff shouldnt be translated into english ... *donuts says Rock Lee* ahhh thats better ^^
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 22:04 EST
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holy shit whats going in here what the heck happened to cassie...................?
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Reviewed By: Hinata_87 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 12:33 EST
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Is she going to die at the end of the story??? I don't want her to die! Don't be like those other authors and make her die! I will never forgive you if you do that!
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