| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: chevy On: May 08, 2007 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just got 2 idy biddy things to say IT WAS JUST WONDERFUL omg! this is the best fanfic i ever read thanks! great job as i said b4 one trillion cheers for lilpix :-)
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 08:54 EDT
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AWW!! This was so awesome! I was actualy planing on asking my English teacher if instead of reading a book if I could do my book report on this story instead. It's so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Wolf22222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 20:17 EDT
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sob... its over.... D: i'll miss this wonderful fanfiction
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:43 EDT
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I just read your One Good Party story, and now I'm thinking forget Kakashi/OC, you've made me love Kakashi and Sakura together. You should definitley write One Extraordinary Child. I really want to read it.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:17 EDT
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I loved this chap. AWESOME JOB. I'm gonna go cry now as I try to accept the fact that this story is over. please write more.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:06 EDT
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I just read some other people's comments and I forgot to say that I also think a Neji/OC fic would be so good!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:03 EDT
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I read this last night, but the internet was being stupid so I couldn't review, and now I'm happy cause I finally can. THAT CHAPTER WAS SO GREAT! It did just what an epilogue should, it made me happy and sad at the same time. I really hope you do make some kind of sequel to this or do random one shots like you said. And if you want ideas for new fics, then I think you should do an Itachi/OC fic or a Kakashi/OC fic. You know how some people do short Kakashi fics and make him seem really quick to fall in love (or at least have sex), well I think Kakashi is much deeper than that and a fic where he slowly and cautiously falls in love would be really awesome.
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:46 EDT
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I-its... Over??? NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sob* WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! No, no, no!!!!!!!!!! It was such a good story *sniffle* though! Why does it have to *voice cracks* END?!?!?!?! Great update!!! I really enjoyed reading your story, so cute and happy... Funny and such... You truly are a fantastic writer....... I am eagerly reading all your other fanfictions aswell, so update those too please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:12 EDT
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*CRIES HYSTERICALLY IN A DARK CORNER* no it can't be over it just can't I have actually been reading this story since you posted the first chapter. you are the only author in my favorites list! now what am I going to do. I suppose I shall just continue to rock back and forth in utter hysterics! By the way I read the comment below mine and I agree...you should manipulate Neji, he's just always so cold and I think he needs a little girl friend to just warm him up. oh and I'm re reading that school girl story of yours. I really really really really really think you should finish it. I love angst gone lovey dovey. It was the first fanfic I really got into and then you just stopped *tear* but of course it is purely up to you, I do not want to be one of those people who pressure you to update. That's not cool. loong message. Anyways I love your work period. Keep writing, I can't wait till the next fanfic!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. Let me know when you do some one-shots for this fic, I'll check them out.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 18:49 EDT
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i sudgest that the next character you "manipulate" should be Shino, Lee, Neji, or Shikimaru.
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Title: HI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: IM SUPERSEXYPOOKA On: April 25, 2007 20:40 EDT
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LIKE OMG I LUV THE STORY WHY WONT U UPDATE...WAIT...IS IT OVER...NOOO...IT CANT BE....AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH...I HAVE NO POINT IN LIFE...SUICIDE IS ONLY OPTION..................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .................HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............................. ........................................................................... ......NO! LOL...ARENT I FUNNY!!!!!!!YES I AM!!!!! YES I AM...NO...IM NOT....BY THE WAY...MIZZ SANDMAN READS IT TO BUT SHE JUST DOSENT COMMENT ON IT ANYMORE........................YEAH I DONT KNOW WHY....LOL .............................................................AHAHAHHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............. ...................................................NO...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL...
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Title: HI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: IM SUPERSEXYPOOKA On: April 25, 2007 20:40 EDT
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LIKE OMG I LUV THE STORY WHY WONT U UPDATE...WAIT...IS IT OVER...NOOO...IT CANT BE....AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH...I HAVE NO POINT IN LIFE...SUICIDE IS ONLY OPTION..................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .................HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............................. ........................................................................... ......NO! LOL...ARENT I FUNNY!!!!!!!YES I AM!!!!! YES I AM...NO...IM NOT....BY THE WAY...MIZZ SANDMAN READS IT TO BUT SHE JUST DOSENT COMMENT ON IT ANYMORE........................YEAH I DONT KNOW WHY....LOL .............................................................AHAHAHHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............. ...................................................NO...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL...
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! God... You are really good with writing!! :) My sister says you are her idol (Damn it, I wanted that role!!).. She is going to try to write in your style.. She is 13... I think.... Anyway, Gaara is nineteen?!?! Awesome!!! I start college next year... I am so excited!!!!
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! God... You are really good with writing!! :) My sister says you are her idol (Damn it, I wanted that role!!).. She is going to try to write in your style.. She is 13... I think.... Anyway, Gaara is nineteen?!?! Awesome!!! I start college next year... I am so excited!!!!
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