| "Let's get it on" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: wedjateye On: September 10, 2006 21:13 CDT
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Very enjoyable - some wonderful lines. The Starbucks limbo, Ken's ass monkeys and "I'm no ballistics expert". Very funny. Yohji's internal voice is highly entertaining too. More would be good!
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 12:25 CDT
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I adore the sense of humor you gave Ken (I don't think I ever want to be your opponent in a battle of wits *g*). Above all I appreciate your interpretation of Aya's character. It's refreshing to see a writer avoid the cold hearted, self-absorbed, socially challenged, 'fanfic-Aya' stereotype! Your charaterizations and fluid writing stlye have me really looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 23:18 CDT
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ken keeps scene-stealing. it's awesome. and aya's views on limbo...priceless. in fact it's really really good from beginning to end. er, the end of chapter 2. i certainly hope that's not the end. i think fic pimpage is called for...
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 16:10 CDT
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yohji and ken have some great lines together...actually Ken by himself is great "I'm no ballistic expert..." It's nice for once to not see a retarded Ken (I'm guilt of that) and this fic is just so appealing!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 15:06 CDT
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Oh, I'm liking this. I'm liking this very much. Also, your Ken is hilarious. I love it!
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