| "Let's get it on" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Madisuzy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! Had me laughing out loud constantly with all those epic lines. One of my all time favourite Aya and Yohji fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2010 13:49 CDT
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Alright, so I've read this before, years ago in fact, but just recently got back into a very extreme Weiss mood and so am reviewing some of my old haunts. Now I must admit that I'm only on chapter 2 right now, but I just couldn't hold it in any longer and I had to tell you! This is absolutely perfect. I'm enjoying this so much, it's not even funny. I adore your writing style and the humor! oh the humor is too good. The interactions between Ken and Yohji, and Yohji and Aya are cracking me up. I can't wait to continue and I bet you'll get yet another excessive review once I finish the story up. Fair warning ;)
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Reviewed By: MoonY-san On: April 05, 2007 08:06 CDT
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Ok, the way you write your story is certainly very good and you have a great sense of humour; i was surprised when you mentioned Dante's Inferno and the test on the internet that sorts you into one of the circles of hell...i took that test too:))!Basically i agree with the whole story, just that I don't think Aya is that crazy...and trust me, take it from someone that knows more than enough about crazy...well, that being said-not as criticism, per se, just as a thought:*- there's only one thing left to say:plsplspls write more:D Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 08:54 CST
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WWAD is a stroke of genius. -the butler (not logged in)
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Reviewed By: wedjateye (still haven't logged in) On: January 23, 2007 20:17 CST
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I'd cry more about the end of this but I have it on good authority that there may well be a seeeeeequel. (Added squee all my own.) Sex with Omi - yes, definitely an acquired taste. 'his brain was chanting "your dick is in Aya's mouth in Aya's mouth in Aya's mouth Aya's mouth Aya's..."' was perfect. Yohji coming so close to messing things up by being stupid was alternately funny and tense. I enjoyed seeing the softer side of Aya and the indignant side of Yohji. Nicely balanced. (So well balanced there just has to be more...)
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 19:51 CST
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Noooo.... not the end!!!! It was lovely while it lasted. :P Hehe, Aya and Omi... I just wrote a fic myself with one of those horrible dream-sequence AyaxOmi things. Not that the pairing is horrible. Whatever. I love you anyway. :)
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:06 CST
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Oh god. Oh. Oh god. This was an incredibly fun read. Loved the um *twist* to Yohji's dream. Beautiful. Rather sad to see this end, though. Will there be a follow-up arc? Where we get to see if Aya and Yohji ever really become a couple? Hmmmm?... *wink wink, hint hint*
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 04:43 CST
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Argh!The End?No, say it ain't so!This was your usual wonderful mix of humour and tension.Yoji's idiocy was so funny, but sweet at the same time.Aya's wet hug heart-warming and tactile.I like the unlaboured details too - the stuff about the ibuprofen.And laughed out loud at not looking like a credible with threat with a dangling and freshly squeezed dick. Great stuff.Hope to read lots more from you.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooove this fic! I pledge my undying allegiance to your and its brilliance. I can't even describe how I feel about it... For starters, I usually can't stand Ken. I find him annoying and boring. Usually. But in this fic he is the funniest guy in the universe and I can't wait from one chapter to the next just to hear his one-liners. Aya is a total scream. His ability to be horrendously ironic and hilarious in the middle of real and proper angst never ceases to delight. Yohji is almost funnier, what with his self-destructive capabilities and laughing-tears/pee-your-pants inducing introspective conversations with himself. I love the interaction with Yohji and Aya, how it's all very random and unmeditated, but cohesive and understandable at the same time. I like that saying things like 'I love you' doesn't mean a big production beforehand, as it does in most fics. He just out and says it, with no hint it's about to happen. And that's how everything else in this fic happens, and it's completely priceless. 'WWAD' was HILARIOUS. When I started reading an hour ago, I was my normal dour self. And right now I feel a deep sense of irony and amusement toward the world in general, which is quite a feat, and quite enjoyable. Thank you. :) Oh, and I love your vocabulary. I have great respect and appreciation for those with a large and utilizable vocab. Heh. And pleeeeeease update soon! I can't bear the wait!
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Reviewed By: RS On: January 13, 2007 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no oh no oh no...*tell* me this isn't the end of this wonderful, cracked little story !!! Please, please...Need more snappy dialogue, yours is the all-time bestest !
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 12:03 CST
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Lol WWAD is fuckin' hillarious. The way you write Yoji is funny and works. I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 05:12 CST
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The way you write Yohji is so vivid, I can both see and understand him. I love how childish he is in this, how full of hero-worship.As for the situation - giddyfying in the extreme!And I have to admire the metaphor of the balancing act.Yohji thinking Aya didn't have as much fun as him playing WWAD made me smile.And I loved the word choice in 'extravagantly angry'.Much applause.As usual.Also much envy.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 22:48 CST
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Oh, when you get emotional and deviate from the plan, it's a stroke of genius, but when I do it, I should have stayed in the truck. Wonderful dialogue, as always. I want to keep your Yohji forever. WWAD is hilarious. I'll be so sad when this story ends.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 21:46 CST
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"Aya had chosen to provide directions while hanging upside down by his knees off a catwalk about 30 feet in the air. Yoji nodded to himself. Yup; clearly he had a long way to go before he'd be able to play WWAD with real flair"... lol Aya's a real case...I gotta love my Yotan's thoughts
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Reviewed By: vom marlowe On: January 07, 2007 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying this story so much! Your dialog is killer, and your Aya is so sexy. I love your Yoji voice. So happy to see another chapter of this. I laughed out loud this chapter--wwad is just brilliant.
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