| "Let's get it on" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 07:06 CST
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Lol I bow to lack of dicipline and sneaky chapters. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 09:11 CST
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Only one more?! But... I want to know more about how messed up Aya is! Guh, what a lovely chapter. I kept expecting Aya to knock Yohji out though.
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Reviewed By: RS On: November 19, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Aya..was obviously not on consistent speaking terms with reason...Aya was erratic, unbalanced and confused..." Well hell, no wonder Yoji's all into him...who *wouldn't* be. And thanks for FINALLY updating; do you believe I have this story freakin' BOOKMARKED and check it almost every day and was DELIGHTED with the October 22 update but then got all pissy waiting for the latest...well, you get the idea...clearly your readers (at least moi) have too much time on their hands AND you write damn good dialogue. First Ken I've ever seen that I could stand, guess I'll have to retract my euthenasia vote for him. And thanks again for losing Omi, no wonder this is superior to the usual. So give us a nice wrap up, OK ? Maybe another TWO chapters or so, please, please ?? [yes I am greedy, cf 'too much time' comment, above]
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Reviewed By: RS On: November 19, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH come on, what OTHER rating could you give this but a 10? It's so far ahead of the usual trying-too-hard-crap out there... My favorites from this chapter: ..."Aya just looked at him blankly, with a mildly quizzical set to his eyes, as if he were thinking, `Did that horse just speak? How curious.'".... Aya's eyes narrowed, the look shifting more to "that horse has annoyed me; perhaps I will kill it." YES ! I laughed on that one until I had tears. It was right up there with the 'full scrotal contact' and the "we've definitely crossed a line here" response to Yoji's masturbation request [although I don't think he would have quite put it that way, 'jerk off' would be more the man's style, still...] The ultimate for this chapter was Yoji's desire to get over his 'horribly misguided crush'. Boy, haven't we ALL been there ! All in all, nicely done; far above average.
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Reviewed By: Pooja On: November 18, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how funny the things they say and think are. I also like the fact that they can be angsty without being dark and gloomy :P Thanks for writing this and I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
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Reviewed By: slowglass On: November 13, 2006 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this fic. I've been spamming my poor sister with my favorite lines from each section, and she doesn't even know the characters. She still thinks the conversations are funny, though. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm only finished with Chapter 3 and I'm already about to die from laughter. How I missed this story til today, I don't know, but it's a total keeper. Thank you, Keep it up, but on behalf of my keyboard I must say you're a terrible evil person. I can't even look at my coffee for fear of doing a spit take. I think I'm in love :)
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 10:44 CST
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I'm am very, very much enjoying this story! Like I think I said before, I love your Ken. Very amusing. His interactions with Yohji are fun and friendly and a joy to read. The tension you built up between Yohji and Aya is very hot, making the reader just as eager as Yohji is for the sex scene. I'm interested to see how things will go now between them after they've had sex.
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Reviewed By: shu no baka (not logged in) On: November 11, 2006 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"damn the torpedoes, I'm in love." Oh I love that sentence! And the entire fic until now!!! and it keeps getting better! XD I luff ziss!!! XD
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 03:38 CST
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Yay! You update right on time as promised! I come to your writing with great expectations now - and you don't disappoint. Your dialogue is fantastic - sharp, funny and sounds like real speech. I love the intensity of feeling you convey with such a light, airy style. And the sex? Hot, hot, hot! Many thanks for sharing. kispexi2/Cath
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 01:44 CST
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I'm so glad you updated! I love your conflicted, contrary Aya. Ken had more great lines ('the road to love is paved with toads' made me laugh). Yohji finally getting laid was wonderful. (And I love your solution to Omi - just omit him!)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: November 10, 2006 23:08 CST
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Whoa! Nice smmmmmmmmmmmmmexxx. Finger lickin' good! More...please *pouts dramatically*
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Reviewed By: wedjateye On: November 04, 2006 02:27 CST
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Everything you've written is highly entertaining. I loved the 'baseball mitt festooned with knives'. The dialogue is scintillating. Yohji scraping admissions of liking and jealousy from a perverse Aya is wonderful to see. So much to love in this series.
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Title: sam i am
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 17:05 CDT
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lol, this just gets better and better...poor yohji
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson NSI On: October 12, 2006 21:41 CDT
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I love this. I read most of it aloud to Acid Rain. I adore your Ken and his vicious sense of humor. And Aya and his sly sense of humor. Poor messed up baby. I think Yohji is perfect : sarcastic and trying to be pragmatic and romantic at the same time. You absolutely defined Aya and his angst in the line about liking him as he was being horrifying. Brilliant.
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