| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEE! Wow..wowowowow. I LOVE this fic! You absolutely MUST update soon and I mean soon!!! ~_^ hahah but seriously this is freaking awesome. I was like biting my nails the whole time!!!! lol. you're awesome. i give this story two MAJOR thumbs up! hehehehe. i will be back soon!! ^_^ and thank ye SOOO much for your reviews on 'RIB'. Arigatoo! ^_^ Talkie soon! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 14:30 CDT
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YOWZA!!! amazing! hahaha crap, the only thing missing is a v/b and im really craving for something spicy (im freezing my butt off here in london for vaca) - can't wait till im back in august so i can review you and post regularly! (you do realize all the SITC chaps are ded. to you right?!) |
Reviewed By: Son Bra On: July 03, 2002 14:02 CDT
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I enjoyed the whole chapter except the part where Videl calls Bulma an old hag. After a comment like that Bulma would've had more to say than--get out of my house. I was really hoping Bulma would sock it to Videl. Regardless, nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: Angel On: July 03, 2002 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally loved the fight chapter, please update soon. Your not that bad about udating so i didn't put it in bold print or anything. But that doesn't mean you can slack off, k. can't wait to read the v/b part. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:20 CDT
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lol this is great! I love it.. keep going! I just can't wait till it's Veggies turn to get some LOL |
Reviewed By: ryan On: July 01, 2002 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god damn this is the best fic i have ever read i hope or better yet i demand in update |
Reviewed By: not another one On: July 01, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm.. i hate to break this to you, but there is no way that drug could ever be made safe. And although I realize this si a fanfic, and it's for funa nd doesn't have to be realalistc or w/e, it's still really stupid to put that about estacy, cuz even if it were, 'safe' the user wouldn't just have to face the sexual effect, but the other effects as wellsuch as these: "Psychological difficulties, including confusion, depression, sleep problems, drug craving, severe anxiety, and paranoia during and sometimes weeks after taking MDMA (in some cases, psychotic episodes have been reported).
Physical symptoms such as muscle tension, involuntary teeth clenching, nausea, blurred vision, rapid eye movement, faintness, and chills or sweating.
Increases in heart rate and blood pressure, a special risk for people with circulatory or heart disease. "
Ta da.. so you see there would e other side effects.. other than that it's a good story. Sry, but I'm a fact grl. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: priss On: July 01, 2002 17:13 CDT
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ooooooooooohhhhh i liked that chapter! but i mostly liked the fight! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
That cat fight was classic! I loved it, especially coming from mild-mannered Videl. G/CC hehe, unique scene, I'm kind of glad she folded first. As for Bulma... I can't imagine Vegeta is too happy with her judging by the previous chapter. I think Gohan can forgive Videl but I'm interested to see how Vegeta will retaliate for being toyed with once this whole bet is over. I thought it was sweet that Goku just let it go :) Looking forward to next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji (not logged in) On: July 01, 2002 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE!! Well, I just can't wait for the v/b lemon! You know, hentai little me! Make it long and sweet, kay? Kay!
Great job yo! |
Reviewed By: SusiQ On: July 01, 2002 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just love this. Don't you think its amazing we all enjoy this stuff and we are different nationalities (I'm prudy old British and old enough to know better)This breaks down barriers far better than cultural exchanges |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: July 01, 2002 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now we're getting somewhere. For your first G/CC fic you out did yourself. I think I'm going to make a prediction for the next chapter. I see you writing about Videl and gohen because you want to keep the best for last (the B/V chapter) Anyeay, prove me right or prove me wrong, but just get the next chapter out soon PLEASE!! Can't wait until next time. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 00:13 CDT
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(this is for Ch 11, since I couldn't submit on FF.net) Those girls better watch themselves! It looks like they have three ticked-off and frustrated Saiyans on their hands. And a brooding Vegeta is never good! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:51 CDT
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ARGH! It cut off my last review! Damn those arrows! >) *smirks* That would be cool, but it's up to you. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:49 CDT
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GREAT!!! So, Chi-Chi's out of the bet now, and Bulma and Videl hate each other more than anything else> |
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