| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dreg [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those are the ratings I give you..And Im not just making them up, Ive really thought about each and every one of them.
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Title: i luv you!!!
Reviewed By: MarsMarmalade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
first off this story is making me laugh so hard i damned near pissed my pants a minute ago!!! i haven't read all the posted chapters yet so i hope it keeps on getting better. on a side note, i love the way you sent trunks to your room, i've been wanting to do a very similar thing for years!!!!!!!
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Title: That was great!
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
actually,i think i read this fic like a year ago. I just found out about mediaminer.and i loved reading lemon fan fics. I didnt register and didn't make my own fan fics before.and i didnt know that it mattered if i reviewed. yours was the first story i read in this web site. BUT congratulations!it's on featured fan fics now!
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Reviewed By: angel69 On: September 25, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic. It was very intertaining and very funny. It was very creative and i like how you use the characters and interact with each other. Its been awhile since i read a fic this great. Don't get me wrong there are a lot of great fics out there but this one was funny and intertaining at the same time!!!!! Continue your good work and i hope to read more of your fics soon!!!!!!!!!!!! You are great!!!
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Reviewed By: angel69 On: September 25, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!!!!!!!!! I like how in the end of the chapter you make it like the character talks to you!!!! I know there is more chapters but i could not wait to tell u that i love it so far!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: little miss crazy On: July 26, 2003 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAA!!! THAT WAS REALLI FUNNY! OMG! I HAD A BAD FEELING WHEN THAT GIRL BROKE ANOTHER GLASS! HAHAHAHAHA! AN IT ENDED UP THAT CHI CHI GOT THE RITE GLASS TOO!!! HAHAHAHAHHA!! but i hafta say. poor poor vegeta goku an gohan. oh poor poor them. but in the end they got the nonstop sex they wanted. ^_^ dis was a good fic. an i guess daz all i hafta say. JA! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: trunks' lil bitch On: July 07, 2003 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THAT IS THE FUNNIEST FIC IVE READ YET U R SO GOOD AT WRITING JB I LIKE THE VEGGIE AND BULMA LEMON IT WAS GOOD BUT I STILL FELT SOORY FOR ALL THE GUYS THEY HAD TO WAIT SO LONG WELL KRILLEN DIDNT BUT I STILL FELL SORRY FOR THE REST AND THE GIRLS HAD TO CONTROL THEMSELVES UNTIL THE END ...BUT IT WAS A REALLY GREAT FIC WRITE MORE FICS |
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luuuuuuuuuuuuved this fic, is so funny and clever. Keep it up.
Blue Siren |
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo!!! this fic totally rocked!!!! this is absolutely one of my all time favourites. Yous is wicked! Bouyakasha!!!! Aight!!! ini'? *ok, stopping the rambling now ^-^*
I loved it! a hundred thumbs up!!!
~Blue Dragon~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 09:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... I keep having this nagging feeling that it would have been cool if, upon telling the guys about the bet, and being asked by Vegeta if Bulma was refusing him for a few zeni, Krillin had responded, "It's not really about the zeni; it's about proving who's stronger."
Heh! Bet that'd've stumped him! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 11:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Needed some distraction today, so I reread "No Friends for Goku," and decided to do my part to keep this deliciously funny piece on the "most visited" list! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! When I saw that this was not only NC-17 but also on the most-visited list, I thought the worst, but this had a great plot with great twists and cool character depictions. I was chortling out loud from chapter one!
"Honey, please tell me what's wrong. Are you mad at me? You're not sick are you; is it-- Why is this cookie jar labelled 'willpower'?" |
Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
emm... wow...
this storyis soo cool.. you're really good at this..
and I suck on writing reviews..... lol |
Reviewed By: amberwaves On: January 23, 2003 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWA HA HA! This is the greatest. I laughed, I cried, I'm going to read it again and again. But poor Vegeta... hehe somehow I wonder if he deserves it? NAH! |
Reviewed By: daniel meyers On: January 09, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was fucking funny. |
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