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 Reviewed By: Naughty Puppy  On: May 13, 2002 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was so excellent, i loved it but don't go thinking i'm a pervert cause i'm not.
 Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2002 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey man keep it going i want to know how Vegeta gets to Bulma
 Reviewed By: silverdragon  On: May 13, 2002 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOO! Geez, I kinda feel bad for Videl now. :( More! I really want to see what Vegeta's going to do! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing  On: May 13, 2002 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, I say let Videl and Gohan have some. The girl is obviously too weak to handle it.... -_^

Now, the Vegeta/Bulma scene should be nice. Let's see if Vegeta has more willpower than Gohan shall we. Heck, everyone always beats Vegeta in everything. Heck with Bulma, let Vegeta win!!! lol

O_o, yes, you're review...it was interesting. >_
 Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2002 04:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
so, are you going to wright more?
 Reviewed By: masume  On: May 12, 2002 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was great! and so cute,as always! keep it up. good laughs to be had in this, for sure!!
 Reviewed By: Brie-chan! (MSP)  On: May 12, 2002 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty Please, for the love of Vegetasei's god! Continue!!!!!!!!!! What torture will Goku bring to Chi Chi, what suffering will Bulma go through from the hands of Vegeta? *rips out hair* Dammit I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Susan  On: May 12, 2002 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dammit, that finger licking part drove me up the wall. I feel really bad for both of them but specially Videl cause she got all caught up in this bet. Tell you what, do them both a favor and let them finish what was started in the kitchen. Then write that chap on B/V. They've waited this long, a little longer won't kill them (although by now I'm sure Veggie wants to blow up the earth). Great story ^_^
 Reviewed By: priss  On: May 12, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THE WAY YOU UPDATE SO.................QUICKLY;) please please continue? OH AND BY THE WAY THE CHAPTER WAS GREAT!
 Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 12, 2002 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Oh. Man.. I'm so sorry Videl.. *sobs right along with her* Man, that sucks! B/V scene.. *eyes turn into gigantic saucers*
Keep it up! Don't let that whiny little Videl chase you out of it XD Lol. Keep it up!!!
 Reviewed By: Callie  On: May 12, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked it!! I can't wait to read more, especially what happens to Bulma and Vegeta, and, oka, Chichi and Goku *grins* Well keep up the good work and update soon!!
~Callie
 Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 12, 2002 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!! That chaper ruled! And when Gohan sucked her fingers...I just melted away! You could at least let them have a quickie, for goodness sake! Please hurry with the next chpater, your updates are right on time!
 Reviewed By: silverdragon  On: May 12, 2002 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so great! I really want to see what the guys are going to do! Anyone else feel the tension? Write more!
 Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 11, 2002 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHH! SO GOOD!! NEED . . . MORE . . . NOW! This is SO good . . . i love how you don't just jump into them all having sex . . . it is so, tasteful, i guess? Keep up the REALLY GOOD work!
 Reviewed By: priss  On: May 10, 2002 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
IT WAS TO FREAKING SHORT! I WANT MORE GIMME MORE i mean very nice uh could you please make another? longer this time? thanks
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