| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jay On: May 06, 2002 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You are right though, we don't have enough confidence in Bulma but who would? Have you taken a good look at Vegeta lately? ^_~
After reading this chapter, I have to change my vote. I vote for Bulma! The reason? Well, after you explained how she needed to prove her strength, I have to agree. Although she doesn't have physical strength, she isn't weak. Not by a long shot!
So go Bulma! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pour Videl. I have some, close to non, faith in Bulma. I mean she is married to Vegeta, right? I can't wait till you update. :) |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favorite quote in this chapter is:
'...the idea of a sexually frustrated Vegeta running amuck was just plain…scary.'
Perdictions:
The first one to break will have to be Videl. It just has to be! I do think Bulma is going to be strong enough to keep Vegeta off him...and Chichi? She'll jsut harp poor Goku until he flies off. Go fig.
He Haw! So funny! This is such a great way to start a Monday morning! Thanks so much!
Now get to typing on that next update! I can't breathe without it! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it! Please update again soon, and thanks for the wonderful welcome back to Mediaminer! |
Reviewed By: Patrick On: May 06, 2002 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This some great piece of writing!
Wite quickly and hurry- i can't wait for the
next part of the Saga of the Bet. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww, thanks JB, but I beg to differ. If it weren't for your fics I'd be goin nuts at 3am (man it sux to be a nightowl). So pardon me if I think you're the best. Anywho, great chap. Leave it to you to get me interested in a little lemon between K and 18. So now that a day has gone by how long will it be before one of these ladies finally gives in? You know, I keep thinking about poor Veggie...probably out in the woods... somewhere... making time with a fallen log...O_o, ok forget I said that. Too much ice cream and getting brain freeze. Well, you know I can't wait for the next chap, right? Something tells me I'll be in for a big laugh. C ya |
Reviewed By: shadow On: May 06, 2002 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would say...
GREAT!!!!!
ehheheh, sorry, i get a bit strange at times... so, you gonna wright more? come on, i need it!
k, so i say it's good, and...uhh... it's good! |
Reviewed By: person On: May 06, 2002 01:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
ok, did i Review yet? no? k. anywz damn, this is FUNNY!!! please wright more? it's better then i can do, and it's good to! hey, that almost rymed... |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's True Love On: May 02, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story!!! It's awesome!!Very original! Keep up the good work, and update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 02, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee! That was cute! She scooted right off the bed! Ha! That's what she gets. I love this, it's just getting better and better. I love the crack Trunks made about what Bulma wouldn't do. Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: SsjGoten On: May 02, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I CANT STOP LAUGHING. THIS IS A GREAT FIC...POOR VEGETA,GOHAN AND GOKU. LOL ILL SAY..CHI-CHI IS GOING TO WIN. |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the newest installment of your story! I did notice, however, that your spelling slipped up a little, but nothing major. I was wondering, are you going to make 18 and Krilin keep the money? That would be sooooooooo wrong! I also think you should get Goten into this more, but that's my personal opinon since Gotne's my favorite character! All in all, this is an AWESOME!!!!!! I'm looking forward to the next installment!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY! Heh heh, ooo! Can't wait too see what happens! Post another chap soon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
roflmbo! OHMIGOSH! That was hilarious! Poor Veggie! I tell you, if it were me and him.... I'd be giving the others the money! One night away from him is one too much! lol
`I swear that man's voice alone could drive me to a climax…' Man, you are naughty! And hey, don't blame me for Vegeta not getting any. And really, if she had given in, it would've been ooc. She's too stubborn. I think Vegeta should find out and tell the others.... Then they can tease the women! Just a thought. ;) |
Reviewed By: Jay On: May 02, 2002 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i couldn't stop myself from laughing. i love it. oh, and that remark about his voice, oooohhhhh. keep up the great work and hurry up and update.
chichi's abstinence is realistic to her character (in my mind anyway) but bulma??? bulma without vegeta and sex? yeah right.
anybody out there want to bet me $50 that chichi wins the bet?
oh, and i found the link to this fic on Gokugirl's site. thanks GG for the link, it _is_ worthy of being 'fic of the week.'
jadedbest, iI can't wait to read more of your work. |
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