| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 18:20 CDT
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I can't believe they are going to tell Tsunade that Hinata and 'Katoki' ran away. ... are you trying to kill off Naruto right after you bring him back from the dead? lol. I can't help but wonder if Sasuke is going to think Naruto and Hinata lied to him when he thought Katoki was Naruto at first. Is he even going to give him a chance to explain before he kicks his ass? so many questions, so little patience. I can't wait for you to update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nichole On: July 18, 2007 11:10 CDT
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OMG He finally got his memory back, and he is going back! I'm jumping out of my seat here! What is going to happen once people realize that Naruto is back from the dead? PLEASE get the next chapter out real soon.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: korbaton [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. He lives again! Thank goodness. Having read the whole of your story over the course of one day, I must say that I am very, very, very impressed. One of the most original and intriguing Naruto fanfictions I've ever read. The characters are very well-developed; Kouden is exactly who I'd see as being Hinata and Naruto's child, the Rookie Nine are the same bunch of loons in your tale as they are in the canon, and overall, I'd just say that this fic kicks ass. I look forward to seeing more of Naruto come back, and I really wanna see just how Hinata will react to Naruto's "awakening," so to speak. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: upchuck605 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story--it's very well thought out and developed and really explores a very different future than what most authors assume for Naruto. Occasionally there are some grammar and spelling issues, but it's better than average (which sadly isn't that good). I also think your style is easy to read, but somewhat formal as well. Great story! I look forward to updates eagerly!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i pretty much figured katoki was naruto, but it was entirely different to actually read when he got his memories back. i love the way you ended that chapter, but at the same time i hated it. damn the cliffhangers... please, please, PLEASE update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story u are a awsome writer keep it up
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 12:06 CDT
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AHA I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!
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Reviewed By: master of all and nothing On: July 12, 2007 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome and brilliant fic can't wait until next chap is posted also I NEWWWWWWW ITTTTTTT!!!!!! Bwaaa Haaa haa haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Title: FAIL encouragement
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 23:32 CDT
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Don't worry :D Parents are usually tripy and everything so maybe after a nap or something your dad will be okay. CONGRATS on escaping HS and Thank you for the cool fic
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Reviewed By: This is Juan Carlos On: June 22, 2007 18:58 CDT
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wow...that sucks...anyways, I am glad u r not giving up on Mokushita...AND I hope you continue writing since this fanfic is the BEST I have ever read!!! :D Thanks and good luck on the search!! XD
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Title: Update please
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:44 CDT
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No updates ye :( ,you are torturing your readers. Please do not abandon the story.
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Reviewed By: THE_WRITER_OF_CROW On: June 15, 2007 10:07 CDT
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its a good story. exelent plot. need a little work on the grammer. :P p.s. when is the next update coming out
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Reviewed By: mousetrap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update or say when you will start adding chapters again. Almost the same style as the manga. excellent work
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nagging part of me says Katoki is Naruto. Hm. That was really funny when Katoki came out naked and then Sakura commented. XD Katoki and Hinata are like perfect for each other. Anyway I really like the chapter.
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. i have been reading and watching for updates for a few weeks now and i love it. i know i like a story when i'm thinking ahead to who some people are and how the plot will turn out. that is what you story does. i thank you for writing something so enjoyable.
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