| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:42 CST
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Well that chapterwas pretty god but the part where Hinata to me seem to be wanting sex from Katoki but now with this chapter I am kinda confused you say Katoki isn`t Naruto but when Sakura tells him he kinda reminds her of Naruto and then he has that attack and he tells Hinata what he can remember were sounds of screaming and didn`t Hinata scream when her dad stad Naruto with his sword and with this pairing your making of Hinata and Katoki the only way I will like it is if he really is Naruto and that sucks that Kouden missed the mother who doesn`t want him toknow she is still away oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: fartmasterking [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:55 CST
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AWESOMENESS!!! I love it! Keep it up, if you do finish, make a seconed. PLZZZZZZZZZ
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool!! Anyways, even though you said that Katoki isn't Naruto, I still think that Katoki could actually be Naruto!! ^^ I love your story, and now...I wish i had a baby fox to take care of!!! ^^ Thanks for writing this awesome fanfic for all of us!! Well, keepup the good work!! ^^ Anyways, I everyone (including me) to stop asking questions that "might" ruin the story...Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 11:49 CST
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This was good I still hate the idea of Hinata falling for Katoki and I still wish somebody would kill him anyways I am glad that Kouden has this baby fox to cheer him up since his mother seem to me doesn`t want by makig him think she is dead I know Naruto didn`t have any parents because they were actually dead but what is her excuse what because she doesn`t nobody from her home village to know she is still alive so she just abanden hers and Naruto`s son just so she can be with this smooth talker somewhat look alike Naruto oh well update soon and keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 11:20 CST
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Well I thought this chapter was pretty good mainly bcause Sasami beat that loser Katoki I still wish he would die ok now the question is what is the reason Hinata want her own son to think she is dead what so she can be with this ass sorry about tht I just don`t like him or does she really want to die so she can be with Naruto who in my opinion is stil alive but the way she is acting she has already forgotten him because of Katoki and thats the one of the reasons why I hate hi the other reasons I haven`t thought of yet oh well please update soon oh yeah I thought you said by the new year your computer will be taken away anyways I am glad it hasn`t since you are updating your story so keep up the great work
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Title: MMMMMMM-AZING
Reviewed By: itachi wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW i love this story its so something its out of the blue n everything i mean its so creative n stuff i like it alot and i cant wait until u write more ive finish the story and i think im gonna go crazy
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:22 CST
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Well I guess I can just keep on reading but now I have a question now that she is joining kumo what will she do about her son forget him I thought she was planning to protect him from afar but now it looks like she is going to forget to be with Katoki the guy I don`t like and I hate to say it by the way Hinata seemed to forget about her son because of Katoki then I am starting to not like this Hinata but then again it sees she wants her son to think she is dead and she calls herself a mother heck I wouldn`t even blame Kouden if stops loving his mother and starts to not like her if he finds out that she is still alive and she joins another village instead of being with him like I said I wouldn`t blame him because she is sure not acting like a mother who cares about her son oh well I just hope the real Naruto comes back finds her with Katoki and kills him now that would make me happy lol well I hope you would be able to update soon because I want to see Katoki die lol j/k please update soon if you can
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Title: ExtraNote!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 20:09 CST
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If you actually read my story, read the one called "A Feeling I Have Yet to Grasp" I forgot to add that. Ja Ne~ ^.^
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Title: *w*
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am your brand new fan, don/t try to get rid of me, for it fail pitifully. I love your story! Its so... Cute! I'm only on chapter fourteen for I only just started reading. And from where I am, you better twist up the story a bit, and KILL Hiashi. Damn I hated him before! ((Who thought a story could dramatically change your thoughts!)) Kouden is so cute! And you made Neji all goofy, I LOVE that. ((I liked Neji before, he's my favorite character! xD)) So... Keep writing! I love your story! ((Is it really your first? I've been writing for a year now, I can't even come CLOSE to that! Which reminds me, read my story and I will love you forever! Bye.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Moghedian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 05:37 CST
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Oh Spiritwolf. I cant say anything that will convince you to read with out revealing anything, but I can tell you that I do appreciate how 'in' to my story you are, and that I'de be very sad if I lost you as a reader. I really cant say anything else, but please stay. I will update as fast as I can untill new years.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 00:55 CST
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OK that chapter was ok but the part where it looks like Hinata is falling in love with this Katoki guy if he isn`t Naruto I don`t like this pairing but if he was Naruto then the pairing would be ok sorry for sound or being rude but if Hinata does fall in love with Katoki and like you said he isn`t Naruto then I will stop reading this story I love the idea of her with Naruto I hate the idea of her ending up replacing him with this guy I hope the real Naruto will appear and kill Katoki mainly because I don`t like him oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON I do remember you saying something about after the new year your computer will be tken away so UPDATE SOON PLEASE and let me know that Hinata won`t be falling for that guy
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:03 CST
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This chapter was ok and you said that Katoki is not Naruto ok I just hope Hinata doesn`t end up falling for him since he isn`t Naruto but the way it kinda sonds like she might be falling for him and if thats so lol I don`t like it and also who is this leader in one chapter I think I forgot her name saying that Kouden kinda reminded her of the leader I think i`m not really sure oh well please don`t have Hinata fall for Katoki please don`t have that happen anyways keep up the great work update soon
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Reviewed By: Moghedian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 02:36 CST
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Ahhh, Spiritwolf, your wrong, he's not Naruto, he's just a clever plotdevice! You will see, and much to your delight, I shall be updating like crazy for the next two weeks, in hopes of getting 6 chapters up. But I lose my computer due to school after the new year. Thanks for reveiwing though!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 14:10 CST
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I really love this story and this chapter was pretty good so I guess Naruto lost his memory after the attack and I also take it some how his face has also changed thats why Shizune didn`t know who he was and also Hinata I ope I am kinda right about this ok well the thing that suck is you use to update 2 days a week and now it seems like you update now once every 2 or 3 weeks I just wish you would go back to updating Monday and Thursday again because I can`t get enough of this story because it is so good oh well I guess I will just have to wait what probably 2 or 3 more weeks till its updated again anyways keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 13:50 CST
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Well this chapter was ok I was pretty much bored at the first part but when you finally got to Kouden I wasn`t so bored I liked that part oh well update soon
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