| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: demoncell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it more than ever. Though it kind of annoys me that Hinata doesn't know it's NARUTO. It is naruto right? Or am I imagining things. Hey can you give me some pointers on my story 'Reborn'? If you would, that would be really helpful. Please and Thankyou. I love your story write more.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pacing of the story is great, the whole story is. I am just wondering why did Katoki scar at all is something wrong with him aside from his memory?. For his kyuubi healing kicked in or he would have hit the bucket when Hiashi attacked and his arm healed so why not his face? And what about the seal on his belly it was kind of big to be notice by Sakura at least for I believe she saw it once.
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! I knew Kouden didn't die! ^^ I am also surprised that Ero-sennin has a daughter, not to be you know, but she sounds hot! ^^ I been reading some fanfics lately, and I am surprised that I have found two fanfics that includes Jiraiya having a daughter! Anyways, Moghedian, you are the best!! Keep it going! "Mokushita Hyuuga" is just as good to me as the original Naruto Manga! ^^
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 09:18 CDT
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really great. i still can't believe Hinata is pregnant. ^_^
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Title: T'is de Awesome-ness!
Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SOOOO GREAT! One of my favorites of all time! Ill be waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I knew it! I knew Katoki and Hinata would live (Katoki has Kyubi and Hinata...well, she is one of the main characters right? ^^)! And I am surprised that Hinata is pregnant by Katoki...Oh well, this was another great chapter!! Thanks Moghedian! Please publish the new one soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: demoncell
Reviewed By: demoncell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, hurry up and right more chapters please!
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Katoki and Hinata will LIVE!! I am sure of that...^^ Anyways, I wonder what Jiraiya means by --"Naruto, Hinata-san...I'm sorry..." Jiraiya rubbed his face again.--...I don't think Kouden will die so fast unless Mog is making a sad ending...Just hope they don't die!! T.T
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Reviewed By: Relvain Jenafuse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 10:55 CDT
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You are amazing keep those chapters coming only one request keep 'Katoki' and Hinata alive
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Reviewed By: JCarlosNg On: April 28, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is great!!...Even though it is of sad for Tenten..., but I know that Neji and Kouden are still alive!! ^^ Anyways, I wonder who is the green haired kid the uses lighting...Interesting. When I see his name, a picture of Kakashi always appears in my mind, but Kakashi has white hair! Not green!...Oh well, this chapter was great! ^^
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Dont let them die they musnt die NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but otherwise im hooked on this story
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really cool!
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful!
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