| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 30 was AWESOME!!! Sorry for not reviewing on the previous chapter! T.T Anyways, now that the secret of how Naruto died is revealed, I bet it is going to be interesting...^^
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Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. can't wait for the next. plz update soon. also i was wondering why do you make the characters click their tongue so much? i am sorry if that sound rude. it is not meant to be.
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so awesome!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis chapter didnt really go anywere but it was still good just so u kb\no good luck with school and i hope u come out of this writers block
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story u must update soon and i mean really soon!
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 13:37 CDT
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This goes for the entire series so far: Excellent story, great way to write. Keep going, me and a couple of friends want to see what happens to Hinata, Kouden, and co.!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 23:42 CDT
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I knew it Katoki is Naruto and if e isn`t have did he get the same scars Naruto got and also Kakashi knows he is Naruto and now I take it Hinata is going to have another kid the thing is I don`t really like Sasuke but I love how he got on Katoki`s case lol and Icann`t wait till I read what Tenten does to Neji for not telling her Hinata was still alive lol oh well keep up the great work and update soon heck it seems like your the only one who is updateingoh well
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Reviewed By: I am JuanCarlos ng On: March 07, 2007 18:09 CST
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Never mind, it came back...sorry for the bother...^^
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Reviewed By: I am Juan Carlos Ng On: March 07, 2007 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to Chapter 26?? I read it and printed it, and it was good and funny!! I loved it...^^ Well, what happened?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 13:44 CST
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I thought this chapter was pretty good I was kinda confused to why Hinata slammed the door shut until this chapter and now I am wondering who is it now that seen Hinata was it Teten or Anko I cann`t remember who else went with them oh well I just hope that youwill UPDATE soon
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off damn you for making such a great story. i have been siting at my computer for the last 6 or 7 hrs reading it. this story rules!!! and it makes me sad that you might not be able to update til the end of feb. well i hope the next chapter is as great as the rest. can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 18:29 CST
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so when is naruto going to be back to normal and regain his memories?
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more it's so good!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 18:13 CST
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That was a pretty good chapter I like the idea that kouden told hs teammate who his real parents are ok okand now I know the leader`s right hand or was it left hand man is actaully a woman with child but now the 2 questios I have is who is this leader and what is his plan to do with the child when it is born wat is he planning to seal a demon inside the child god it is kinda fun trying to guess what is going on lol oh well keep up the great work and update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:52 CST
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Ok I have a question I know you said Katoki isn`t Naruto but i`m not sure about that for some reason I have been thinking what if Naruto didn`t die but some how split into two ppl and those 2 ppl are Katoki and the leader of this bad guy group the one I kept asking you about and got no reply because didn`t that one woman in the group say that kouden kind reminds her of there leader and the leader has red eyes what if the leader is the fox demon and Katoki is the good half thats just my opinion and to me it kinda like it could have happened please reply to that because it is really bugging me to know if I might be right heck e-mail me if you want because I know our not going to say it because it might ruin the ending maybe but I got to know please let me know lol
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