| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaihirah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 10:36 CST
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I didn't read all of it yet cause I don't have time. BUT IT'S AWESOME!!UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:00 CST
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so far so good can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Moghedian [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 00:33 CST
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Sorry everyone for the erratic updates. It's still supposed to be on mondays and thurdays, but I was recently on a vaction and missed a thursday, and then my computer broke, im using a different one right now, and I might not be able to put one up monday. It might have to be later. Glad to know you cared though XD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 15:51 CST
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The story is really good I can`t wait till it is updated I thought it was going to be updated on Mondays and Thursdays I guess its only going to be Mondays now oh well I guess I will have to wait till then to see what happend next
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 14:39 CST
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Wow I really love that chapter and my opinion of this chapter to me its proof that Naruto is still alive well thats still just my opinion because Naruto can`t be killed that easy I have a feeling when his body was dumped in the woods he healed himself but the only thing got me is what was he doing for the past 11 or 12 yrs oh well I guess I have to wait till next few chapters to fid out if I am right man I love this story keep up the GREAT work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:07 CST
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That was a good chapter I just can`t wait to find out more about those ppl and what is there target oh well keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:58 CST
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Man I love this story and this chapter was great so I take it that Naruto is still alive if he is not sure what he is up to to my opinion i`m not sure if thats what you meant in this chater but to me when you had the red haired girl whoever she is say that well she didn`t actually say Kouden name but said he reminds her of somebody else gets me thinking that Naruto is alive well thats just my opinion well keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:27 CST
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That was a good chapter but I am still wondering who were those ppl in the last chapter oh well I guess I have to wait until you decide let us know well keep up the great work
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Title: I Love it!!
Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your fanfic is great, and it makes a lot of sense! Keep up the great work, and keep up the fanfic!! ^^ Your are the best!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 14:24 CDT
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Now that was a great chapter and now I am wondering who are these ppl in the cave and what is there target oh well I guess I will have to wait till monday or later chapters to find out keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked that chapter I hope Naruto is still alive since they couldn`t find his body and Hinata her father should be killed Brutally no not brutally killed just beate to an inch of his life and have his body dumped in the woods so the animals can eat him for what he did to Naruto and have it blamed on Hinata oh well I cann`t wait till monday now to read another great chapter from a great story so keep up the great work
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Moghedian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 13:49 CDT
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Thank you for all of your reviews, and Dumbledork, there may not have been a body, but as Kiba said, there was alot of blood spread out everywhere, and the smell of various wild animals. He was probably eaten.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really a nice story. Too bad Naruto died, or did he? No body, no eveidence, right?
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Reviewed By: dragon_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 18:44 CDT
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Awsome story!Keep it coming.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks! I really like the stroy line of it one of the best I've ever read.
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