| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: RS On: February 19, 2007 00:14 EST
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On re-reading it just gets better: the 'scarred, skinny & deadly' Farf, and the 'it's all over between us Daddy' line to Crawford - now *that's* sacrilegious, LOVE it. Sorry folks, I'm not rooting for Yoji to come out ahead on this one, evil Aya is just too much fun to be tamed and Yoji deserves whatever the hell he gets - and it *will* be hell - for even trying.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 15:59 EST
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Awww, poor Aya. Is it too predictable for me to be hoping that Yohji gets to kiss him all better? I liked your Scwartz interaction. Schuldig's voice is very amusing. Aya's in over his head, obviously, and watching him struggling is both compelling and painful.
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Reviewed By: RS On: February 07, 2007 01:13 EST
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Great story; complex characterizations, love the way Aya keeps flipping between one-dimensional nut case, pathetic soul and flat-out posessed. You're a good writer, one of the best out there; give us another installment soon, OK, so we have something to look forward to...? Please, please, pretty please ?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just so very, very good. I loved Crawford's meeting with Ran (and all of the implied back story), and Schuldig's conversation with Farfarello as well as his observations throughout. Best of all is the way you've mixed humor, a fascinating plot, angst, and making us care deeply for these characters. Poor Ran, I hope there is a happy ending possible for him.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 06:45 EST
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Lol wierd, wierd, and did I mention wierd. This fic just keeps getting stranger and stranger but I still want the next update so see ya then. BTW Fucking-soup-brained-psycos, funny as hell!
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 06:18 EST
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And the plot - OMG, actual interesting, intriguing *plot* in amongst the hotness and angst! - thickens. Nicely paced and sharp characterization. Aya's emotional turmoil is particularly beautifully handled.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 08:26 EST
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Excellent! Manipulative Aya. Wonder how much Yohji will see through. Very believable, albeit a little creepy (which just makes it more believable).
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 04:20 EST
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You have such a gift for Real and Convincing. You have me as fascinated with Aya and Yojhi is - even though I getting his POV. Great emotional depth in this one, leavened with light touches of humour. Beautiful, flowing style. And underlying it all, mystery and a touch of menace. There was this one line ... Great job!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 22:39 EST
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still lovin' this a LOT. i love aya's twisty brain, and how he seems to love manipulation. i like it that aya comforts himself with farfarello's tenderness. and i like it that yohji knows he's being manipulated, and still it draws him further in. and...well, you know what i'm hoping for, so i won't say it again. i'm terribly glad you've been updating. i'm very interested to know into what inextricable web yohji is being drawn.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray for your return to this story! Poor Aya, apparently he's been through so much, and so little of him left other than determination to accomplish his revenge and do whatever is necessary. I love his skill in manipulation that you've depicted, and Yohji's response. Just maybe there is some hope for some Aya healing? In any case, I absolutely love this story.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye (thought I was logged in) On: January 23, 2007 21:03 EST
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Fascinating chapter. Nice to get some insight into Aya's motivations. '...now, he had to remind himself that they'd existed' - poignant and real. Exactly how grief tends to work. Solidifies the feeling that he doesn't believe Aya-chan will ever come back to him too; he thinks of her in the past tense. I also like that Yohji isn't totally Aya's patsy. It's interesting to see him thinking his way through the situation. I like a smart Yotan. I look forward to more revelations.
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Reviewed By: RS On: January 21, 2007 23:10 EST
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We're waiting !!! Please, *please*, it's time to update. This is too good to let go, give us more, I implore you!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 17:41 EST
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aya's very, very, very messed up...and yohji's there to take advantage *grin*
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 04:59 EST
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The plot thickens again! And very nicely. This story has great pace. Yohji was utterly adorable again and Aya's fascinating. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just fascinating. Such a different view of Aya and Kritiker, and an intriguing, not to mention arousing, puzzle for Yohji. I love this story, and am eager for more.
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