| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you've deepened the plot and background, but now I'm even more anxious for more!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 11:39 EST
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Man it's almost like Aya and Farf were made for each other. How the hell is Yoji gonna compete with that?! Lol well I can't wait til you update so I can find out!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 10:08 EST
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Heh, I can barely read it because it's so good! Inspite of my deep-seated prejudices, here I am, reading another FxA scene. So disturbed and yet so natural. Brilliant!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 06:35 EST
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wow...their relationship is so beautiful, in a way, so much MORE than ordinary relationships. i can't imagine yohji being more than a pale, unfulfilling shadow of that. heh, the thought's vaguely insulting to me on farfarello's behalf. farf and yohji just aren't wired the same. and i love aya, not really caring about weiss and secretly affiliated with schwarz. deadly and masochistic, and how eager and tender farfarello is when he's not being brutal. it's marvelous.
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 04:13 EST
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Whoa! Okay, I'm uncomfortable, anxious and terribly intrigued. Not only by this weird relationship but also by the hints of what else is going on. You have a wonderful abiity to combine funny with disturbing, and I find the characters' reactions to such extreme situations completely psychologically convincing. Another great job.
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 04:38 EST
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Another great job. I love your fluid style, your wit and the way you crank up the sexual tension. MORE!!! SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: wedjateye On: November 02, 2006 23:23 EST
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I really enjoy reading your stories. Fabulous, zingy dialogue. I loved the opening scene between Yohji and Ken. You've set up an intriguing scenario and made the motivations of all the players eminently believable. I'd love to see more.
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Reviewed By: Mikko On: October 14, 2006 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(just don't kill Aya in the end) Dayam, that was sooo hot! I wanna read more about this XD Also if/when Yohji and Aya have rough sex and Yohji beats the crap outta Aya :D And also Aya needing to be dominated is just so hawt oO'
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Reviewed By: me On: October 05, 2006 15:24 EDT
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i'm loving this, i hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 04, 2006 14:06 EDT
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Fabulous, interesting, sexy start. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 09:52 EDT
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I also skimmed the FxA part, and am rooting for some AxY, but I guess it'll be YxA because of the domination thingy.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 09:50 EDT
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Intriguing! Can't wait to see what happens. Great characterizations; I found chapter 1 rather disturbing (cause Aya would totally be into that, methinks), and am very glad you put up chapter 2 too! I think Yohji will be quite surprised :D
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 22:07 EDT
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ok im completely opposite to RQ i skimmed the FxA bit , but i can't wait for the Y x A bit to get it on!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 16:55 EDT
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*sigh* i figured yohji was going to try something like this. he'll probably end up succeeding, too. ah, well. my poor farfarello. 'hit across the face with a dead fish'...you didn't read 'The Sous-Chef,' did you? :D it'll be interesting to see how yohji decides to implement his new plan, and to see if farf's willing to fight for his piece o' tail. and i still wanna know what happens when aya wins. yay! it's always good to read your work.
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 16:25 EDT
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oooohhh...you wrote FxA, my absolute most favorite pairing in the known universe, which hardly anyone writes, and did it so well! so fucking hot, nothing sugar-coated. just as it should be. heehee, what happens if aya wins, i wonder? as usual, ken gets the best lines. i hope they don't save him...i wonder if farf perhaps needs aya just as much. i'm terribly curious about this new history, now.
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