| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 06:45 EST
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Lol wierd, wierd, and did I mention wierd. This fic just keeps getting stranger and stranger but I still want the next update so see ya then. BTW Fucking-soup-brained-psycos, funny as hell!
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 06:18 EST
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And the plot - OMG, actual interesting, intriguing *plot* in amongst the hotness and angst! - thickens. Nicely paced and sharp characterization. Aya's emotional turmoil is particularly beautifully handled.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 08:26 EST
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Excellent! Manipulative Aya. Wonder how much Yohji will see through. Very believable, albeit a little creepy (which just makes it more believable).
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 04:20 EST
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You have such a gift for Real and Convincing. You have me as fascinated with Aya and Yojhi is - even though I getting his POV. Great emotional depth in this one, leavened with light touches of humour. Beautiful, flowing style. And underlying it all, mystery and a touch of menace. There was this one line ... Great job!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 22:39 EST
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still lovin' this a LOT. i love aya's twisty brain, and how he seems to love manipulation. i like it that aya comforts himself with farfarello's tenderness. and i like it that yohji knows he's being manipulated, and still it draws him further in. and...well, you know what i'm hoping for, so i won't say it again. i'm terribly glad you've been updating. i'm very interested to know into what inextricable web yohji is being drawn.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray for your return to this story! Poor Aya, apparently he's been through so much, and so little of him left other than determination to accomplish his revenge and do whatever is necessary. I love his skill in manipulation that you've depicted, and Yohji's response. Just maybe there is some hope for some Aya healing? In any case, I absolutely love this story.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye (thought I was logged in) On: January 23, 2007 21:03 EST
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Fascinating chapter. Nice to get some insight into Aya's motivations. '...now, he had to remind himself that they'd existed' - poignant and real. Exactly how grief tends to work. Solidifies the feeling that he doesn't believe Aya-chan will ever come back to him too; he thinks of her in the past tense. I also like that Yohji isn't totally Aya's patsy. It's interesting to see him thinking his way through the situation. I like a smart Yotan. I look forward to more revelations.
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Reviewed By: RS On: January 21, 2007 23:10 EST
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We're waiting !!! Please, *please*, it's time to update. This is too good to let go, give us more, I implore you!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 17:41 EST
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aya's very, very, very messed up...and yohji's there to take advantage *grin*
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 04:59 EST
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The plot thickens again! And very nicely. This story has great pace. Yohji was utterly adorable again and Aya's fascinating. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just fascinating. Such a different view of Aya and Kritiker, and an intriguing, not to mention arousing, puzzle for Yohji. I love this story, and am eager for more.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 10:41 EST
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Everyone's perfect! Absolutely perfect, because Aya should be that messed up and sarcastic and fascinating. And Yoji has enough awareness to know that he is pwned! I loved "pecked to death by ducks." A whole new way of looking at sleep deprivation. This chapter rocked. The last chapter really was disturbing but that's just a measure of how well done it was. And the fact that I'm still here reading this religiously is another measure of it. :)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 06:35 EST
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your interpretations of aya's character never cease to impress me. i'm so in love with him. he's aya as i always wanted him to be. intelligent, manipulative, cold, sexually predacious, sensual, both sadistic and masochistic in the extreme. oh, and i forgot psycho. teh psycho liek whoa, as they say in chatspeak. and yohji, intelligent and P.I.-like, yet still so easy to control by playing to his weaknesses, and still basically a nice guy despite it all. he's great, but you know my preference. i crave more tasty, tasty farfarello, and more of this intriguing dynamic between kritiker and schwarz. i don't want farfarello to lose aya, but wherever you take this story it's certain to be most enjoyable. i know it will because everything you've written is most enjoyable. i'm so happy you came on to the WK scene! *molests you*
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Reviewed By: RS On: December 13, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goody, I get to be the first to review the new-and-improved-with-chapters-added version...and quite a tasty one it is. Revisions to chapters 1&2 are nice, give a little more texture to the story, and the whole Schwartz/Kritiker who-owns-whom thing is *way* original, never ever seen *that* one. If I could give more than a 10 for originality I would, for the Sadistic Aya doll alone. Can't wait for more, you are feeling sleepppyy...when you awake, you will write more, soooonnnn....
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:46 EST
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I am still intrigued as to where this is heading. I look forward to Yohji showing Aya what he's got - it's hard to imagine him having a snowball's chance in this arena against Farf. Consistently engrossing.
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