| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Golo On: January 29, 2012 07:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is just a fantastic take on Yohji and Aya's relationship. I love this version of Aya, cold and the embodiment of an assassin, but still retaining his humanity. You've got a nice, delicate balance going on there that really is believable given his assassin psyche. And Yohji is just freaking perfect here, self-sacrificing, but by no means some naive slut that lets himself get pushed around. I haven't enjoyed a WK fic like this in a long time, thanks for the refreshing point of view. Looking forward to an update! |
Reviewed By: Joybug [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sometimes a bastardized Aya is the best Aya! LOL! awesome fic.
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Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 14:30 EDT
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Wow. This fanfiction was really something... unusual. I can´t say that I really loved it, but it was the most fascinating story I´ve read in the last time, and that surely means something. I´m still not sure if I liked and agree with the way you wrote the characters, but that doesn´t matter. Actually this story is so bloody, so full of violence and sex, of control games, of revenge, of love, of pain that I just can´t let go. I had to read on and on, all the time I tried to understand why the charaters acted the way they did. I still don´t figure everyone out, but I think I can understand most of them in a way. You really wrote a more than special story, especially the plot and the relationships between the characters were very very fascinating, though it was a bit confusing sometimes. But hey, Aya´s so fucked up, surely he´s confusing^^ The only thing that really made me wonder was the last chapter. Why didn´t you continue after that? To me, there are lots of loose ends left. It´d be great to know what actually happened to Aya afterwards, how the whole Kririker/Eszett thing worked out and so on...
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Reviewed By: @met On: March 26, 2009 10:39 EDT
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not sure wat to comment but confusin indeed n dunno.... and this fic is completed? You're Joking, Right?
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 19:10 EDT
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So confusing...I'm not quite sure what anyone is really feeling right now. I just hope that Aya and yohji begin to understand each other better soon before yohji makes a dire mistake, you know, like fulfilling omi and ken's prophecy that he'll leave the redhead. tsk tsk tsk, way to keep me guessing.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: March 22, 2009 01:32 EDT
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good chapter. hope you write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: @met On: February 19, 2009 19:12 EST
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love the humour in ur story... gotta say i loved this chappie! said with lot still kept unsaid, poor aya, yohji n ken-ken... hope aya gets well soon.....
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 03, 2009 00:41 EST
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Great Chapter! Have I told you how much I love the way you write Ken? His "pep talk" was absolutely wonderful
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Reviewed By: @met On: January 11, 2009 05:27 EST
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if only omi knew...but its good that he doesnt! neways, great chapter! aya has way with words, loved how he managed to keep yohji out of this mess, considerin the amount of his involvement.. i wonder how yohji left before omi's arrival, just without word or some arguement maybe? i clearly wanna know if aya really loves yohji even w/ bits n pieces of possible hints... please update soon ^^ keep it up!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: January 07, 2009 00:23 EST
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so painful watching Aya lie there and lie--but then, reading this whole fic has been painful (but in a good way)
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Reviewed By: @met On: December 18, 2008 13:39 EST
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wow! another update... i wonder wats gonna happen, will yohji leave? cant wait 4 next chapter~
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: December 16, 2008 21:21 EST
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Awesome as usual. This is so convoluted, I have to wonder if even Brad sees it all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lelann On: November 22, 2008 15:26 EST
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love it! very interesting and fun to read. I can't wait for more,thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: @met On: November 08, 2008 13:41 EST
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when brad arrived, i nearly got blinded! somebody needs to shoot him (lol) seriously... he must've his reason but no reason is enuff to make Aya suffer so, as stubborn as our red-head is... but seems yohji is tryin his best to anchor aya out of abyss or is it yohji who's hangin on to 'im? as glinwulf said below, i love Ken in this... would there be KenxOmi surprise? (haha) that would be so random but great nonetheless! ^.~
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: November 05, 2008 21:31 EST
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Super chapter. I love this not only because of the interesting plot and great writing, but because I particularly like your take on the characters. A ditzy Ken is boring, but your Ken is strong--a good foil for the others. Keep writing!
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