| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 10:41 EST
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Everyone's perfect! Absolutely perfect, because Aya should be that messed up and sarcastic and fascinating. And Yoji has enough awareness to know that he is pwned! I loved "pecked to death by ducks." A whole new way of looking at sleep deprivation. This chapter rocked. The last chapter really was disturbing but that's just a measure of how well done it was. And the fact that I'm still here reading this religiously is another measure of it. :)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 06:35 EST
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your interpretations of aya's character never cease to impress me. i'm so in love with him. he's aya as i always wanted him to be. intelligent, manipulative, cold, sexually predacious, sensual, both sadistic and masochistic in the extreme. oh, and i forgot psycho. teh psycho liek whoa, as they say in chatspeak. and yohji, intelligent and P.I.-like, yet still so easy to control by playing to his weaknesses, and still basically a nice guy despite it all. he's great, but you know my preference. i crave more tasty, tasty farfarello, and more of this intriguing dynamic between kritiker and schwarz. i don't want farfarello to lose aya, but wherever you take this story it's certain to be most enjoyable. i know it will because everything you've written is most enjoyable. i'm so happy you came on to the WK scene! *molests you*
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Reviewed By: RS On: December 13, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goody, I get to be the first to review the new-and-improved-with-chapters-added version...and quite a tasty one it is. Revisions to chapters 1&2 are nice, give a little more texture to the story, and the whole Schwartz/Kritiker who-owns-whom thing is *way* original, never ever seen *that* one. If I could give more than a 10 for originality I would, for the Sadistic Aya doll alone. Can't wait for more, you are feeling sleepppyy...when you awake, you will write more, soooonnnn....
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:46 EST
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I am still intrigued as to where this is heading. I look forward to Yohji showing Aya what he's got - it's hard to imagine him having a snowball's chance in this arena against Farf. Consistently engrossing.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you've deepened the plot and background, but now I'm even more anxious for more!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 11:39 EST
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Man it's almost like Aya and Farf were made for each other. How the hell is Yoji gonna compete with that?! Lol well I can't wait til you update so I can find out!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 10:08 EST
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Heh, I can barely read it because it's so good! Inspite of my deep-seated prejudices, here I am, reading another FxA scene. So disturbed and yet so natural. Brilliant!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 06:35 EST
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wow...their relationship is so beautiful, in a way, so much MORE than ordinary relationships. i can't imagine yohji being more than a pale, unfulfilling shadow of that. heh, the thought's vaguely insulting to me on farfarello's behalf. farf and yohji just aren't wired the same. and i love aya, not really caring about weiss and secretly affiliated with schwarz. deadly and masochistic, and how eager and tender farfarello is when he's not being brutal. it's marvelous.
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 04:13 EST
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Whoa! Okay, I'm uncomfortable, anxious and terribly intrigued. Not only by this weird relationship but also by the hints of what else is going on. You have a wonderful abiity to combine funny with disturbing, and I find the characters' reactions to such extreme situations completely psychologically convincing. Another great job.
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 04:38 EST
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Another great job. I love your fluid style, your wit and the way you crank up the sexual tension. MORE!!! SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: wedjateye On: November 02, 2006 23:23 EST
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I really enjoy reading your stories. Fabulous, zingy dialogue. I loved the opening scene between Yohji and Ken. You've set up an intriguing scenario and made the motivations of all the players eminently believable. I'd love to see more.
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Reviewed By: Mikko On: October 14, 2006 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(just don't kill Aya in the end) Dayam, that was sooo hot! I wanna read more about this XD Also if/when Yohji and Aya have rough sex and Yohji beats the crap outta Aya :D And also Aya needing to be dominated is just so hawt oO'
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Reviewed By: me On: October 05, 2006 15:24 EDT
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i'm loving this, i hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 04, 2006 14:06 EDT
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Fabulous, interesting, sexy start. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 09:52 EDT
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I also skimmed the FxA part, and am rooting for some AxY, but I guess it'll be YxA because of the domination thingy.
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