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| "The Hybrid" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ha Cha Cha On: November 14, 2007 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this whole story and u have me on the edge! Its been months since your last update and I feel like u've either moved on or forgotten about this fic! This story is 2 good to just b left hangin! PLEASE! I would LOOOVE for u 2 update this story!
| Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 20, 2007 04:24 EDT
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wow this is pretty damn good, only problems I see are every now and then a missed word... like you said it but you were typing so fast you moved on without it.. i do it all the time.. maybe you should have a driend proof read the chapter for you before you post it, cause sometimes we cant catch it cause our brain knew the word should be there and we miss it... but other than that sweet story I cant wait for you to update
| Reviewed By: skanky-uo-chan On: August 19, 2007 17:17 EDT
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well i am hooked give me sum more of that stuff.
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:08 EDT
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Nice solid chap. Hopefully we'll find out more of the what, how, where, and whys of this rebellion in the next chapter since we're finally going to talk to the elusive Dr. Briefs after such a long time. I kind of took this as more of a filler chapter, so you could (as you put it) tie up some loose ends. Don't take that as a negative, though. It's just that after that lemon in last chapter I think anything would seem like coming off the high. Know what I mean? I mean, we were waiting for that scene for a long time. Anyway, I'm checking back almost everyday, even though you're on my favorites list and they automatically email you when a story is updated! Hey, they might miss it one time, you never know! :) See ya next chapter!
| Reviewed By: missy-oa On: May 12, 2007 00:15 EDT
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just wanted to leave you a little review saying that this is one of the better DBZ fanfics I've read in a long time. Your idea is really original and I can't wait to see how the relationship between Bulma and Vegeta evolve. Keep up the good work and uodate soon :p
| Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 11:26 EDT
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so who gets to kill Nappa? *Damn too many hands* eeni meeni minee
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 10:32 EDT
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One word: AWESOME! You're great at doing lemons. I agree, you should do more of them. I just love your interaction between our favorite pair. Man, I'm sure the plot's about to get thick now! I wonder, will we go straight into rebellion mode or will Bulma and Vegeta get to experience life "together" in the ranks of Freeza, before they plot his demise? I mean, we all know they are (all the characters) going to go up against the slimy bastard but, I've always wondered how they (B+V) would handle themselves if they had to face those atrocities together. Anyway, just a thought. I'm glad to see someone else besides me and "Required Name" reviewing. Yay! Can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: Trunks_Wifie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 00:29 EDT
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I Like this story alot it's actually one of the few stories that I have actually followed up on. The only thing that would make me hate this fic is the fact that you take forever to update. Update sooner plz I can't take it anymore I've tried to stay calm but I can't do it anymore I need to know what happens. Thx have a nice day.LOL.
| Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 11:03 EDT
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Long time, no review. Let me fix that now. I agree with "Required Name," I can see the workings of how the story might end, but I can bet that we'll have a heck of a time getting there. And your cliffhangers … you're killing me!! This isn't good for my health, ya know! :) Even though we know he won't kill her, I must admit you had me going there for a split second. Great chapter!! I love the way Dr. Briefs is the head of all this "conspiring against Freeza" that's going on. Sometimes people make him out to be a little too ordinary for my tastes, since I believe that Bulma had to get that genius from somewhere, and we know from the show that her dad was no dummy. I must say, as I'm sure I've said before, that I love the interaction between the characters and how everyone's destiny seems to be intertwined with someone else or directly affected by someone else's choices. This is a very believable story, and I think that's a good thing. It's not so out there that you have trouble figuring out what is going on and why. Kudos to you. As always, sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more!
| Reviewed By: Required Name On: March 25, 2007 18:56 EDT
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Hey, it's been awhile, huh? I just read the last two chapters...what an evil cliffhanger you have left us with...of course, he won't kill her, but it's not as if there aren't a million different things going on. I'm very pleased that everything seems to be coming together. It's as if it's all going to culminate into one big explosive climax...no pun intended, of course, if you believe I'm alluding to the next chapter - I'm not, I'm just speaking generally. But really, this story used to be one big puzzle but it seems although we have some sort of outline to go off of now. So, very well-written last two chapters, thanks so much for updating...I wait impatiently for your next update.
| Reviewed By: Required Name On: February 07, 2007 19:53 EST
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Ahh! You know me WAY too well. I HATE that cliffhanger! You're too evil. I scrolled through your reviews and I agree with artchic: you should do a lemon, it won't turn out messed up. Your kissing scene wasn't cheesy or crappy either, it conveyed the emotions and mindsets of Bulma and Vegeta very well. I cannot wait for the next chapter, like literally...I'm going to DIE! Gah! You kill me, you are so evil! But your writing is amazing, so I don't suggest you stop...EVER. *sigh*...I will wait, but keep up the outstanding writing. I love Kakkarott and Chichi they're so perfect for each other. You do a fantastic job with those two. Thanks for this update and that nasty cliffy...GAH WHAT TAILS???
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 09:17 EST
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OMG! YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE! Anyone ever told you, you're evil!! Ha, ha! Great, great chapter. Evil, evil cliffhanger. You should soooo do a lemon. You've got my vote. I can't even tell that you've never done this before. I've read a lot of great DBZ fanfiction over the years by the great authors (in my opinion anyway), Lisalu, LavendarGoddessV, Ember, LisaStarr, Tempest, Toshiba, and you are definitely one of the up and coming authors that I will be keeping my eye on. Well written DBZ fanfiction is getting harder and harder to find, so I am glad that I came across your story with so much creativity, thought, and passion behind it. Well, now that I'm done with my DBZ fanfiction lovefest :) on to the rest of the chapter/story review. I'm so glad you did a fight/love scene with the infamous two. It made me happy to read it. I think you did a great job on the emotions and tension and lets not forget passion between them. I love the way you've given Chichi more play to her warrior side too. Woman impowerment!! Ha, ha. Needless to say I'm dying for the next chapter to find out about these tails?! I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting, but until then I'll go check out your other story to keep me sane in the meantime. :)
| Reviewed By: Required Name On: January 20, 2007 23:37 EST
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Ahh! Another fantastic job, the long wait was completely worthwhile. I love reading this story, I love it so much! I like how you give equal attention to all characters, with a bit more emphasis on Bulma and Vegeta (they ARE the coolest, after all..!) I don't think you rushed with ChiChi and Kakarrot, they click like that, it's not weird or anything. Your plot is so intricate, and yes you ARE evil, leaving off with a cliffhanger like that. I cannot wait to find out what Raditz told Bulma, I really wanna know. The part with Doctor Briefs was touching, it was a good idea to bring him in and talk about him. Thanks so much for updating, I hope you can soon, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:39 EST
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Let me start by saying I hope everything is alright with whatever you had to deal with medical wise. I'm soooo glad you updated! Another fine job! You're doing a great job weaving and flowing in all the different characterizations and plots. They're detailed yet easy to follow. I also love what you are doing with Kakarot. Just enough cluelessness intertwined with just enough seriousness needed for the kind of story you've envisioned. I'm so intrigued by this half Saiyan Bulma I hope that we get to see her and Vegeta have an all out fight or somehting along those lines. I've always wondered how the beginnings of their relationship would have formed differently if she could "keep up" with him not only mentally but physically. I'm just dying to know what Raditz told Bulma. Something to make her rethink her statements to Vegeta I'll bet ... Well we'll find out soon enough. I love the Vegeta Bulma pairing (that's why I read most Dragonball Z stories) but I like the other relationships you've got going to. You can tell that you have put just as much thought into them as you have the main pair. They don't feel like afterthougts, which is very important. I can't tell you how much I love your story. Update soon please! :)
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