| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wizzy891 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luve it i love every inuyasha stories that have to do with them in high school.............anywayz i luve the story and the song u pick at the end...............lol
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret (not signed on) On: January 27, 2008 01:15 CST
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omfg i loved it!
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Reviewed By: the_cactusalien [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 13:59 CDT
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a totaly LOL moment when Sota caught them kissing. my absolute favorite line: "He could use this for a school project about saliva." xD
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! Can't wait to read the sequel!!!!! So flippin awesome!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's an awesome story! your a great writer!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 05:14 CDT
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interesting story... enjoyed reading it... great work... good job!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol!! Chapter 18 is so funny!!! Can't BREATHE!!!! *Falls out of chair laughing*
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 19:44 CDT
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OKay, I just wanna say, AWESOME FIC! It was great haha. The last scene was really fun to read. I HOPE THE SEQUEL COMES UP SOON. ^-^
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:55 CDT
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Great chapter! Very sad that its the last chapter, though. I love the song you put in it. Can't wait to read the sequel
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 18:52 CDT
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Thank you so much! The sequal sounds very different, but its sounds neat too! I can't wait to read it!! Great job on this story, the rating is off the scale! Bravo!!!!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 18:52 CDT
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yeah, it was great when kinky-hoe ran into HelloKitty and the sequel i know will be good and um.... GREAT JOB! good luck with everything right now. And yes, we found my hampster alive. WHEE! bye!
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Reviewed By: Koga's Chick On: April 07, 2007 13:48 CDT
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omg u finished it and the Hello Kitty thing was funny when Kikyo got blood on it and Kagome was yelling!and i like the new music style this way instead of stopping the music like in ur notebook.omfg over Friday I rote like a lil over From Heaven to Hell!good luck 4 u in that 1*evil smile and wink* I asked if u were over @ ur nans 2day when no1 was home but ur @ ur house w/ Tanile(sp???)It was great and i hope u start the sequel and update ur other stories soon!
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Reviewed By: miley On: April 07, 2007 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great last chapter.the topic for the sequel is unexpected.(in a good way).you can definintly count on me to read it.cant wait for the sequel.wish ya luck.bye.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again!!! srry, but i have been waiting for this for so long and its finally done and kinky-hoe is a bitch and my hampster escaped today and i was really sad and you made me feel better!!!Thanx again for reviewing! I'm waiting for the sequel, i know its gonna be great! Keep me posted - your #1 fan!!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 04:24 CDT
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wow.. wow.. oh, wow. Very Very interesting story. I'm curious to see how the sequel goes, but if its anything like this one, im sure it will be a hit. My only recommendation would be to put a little more maturity into the story for the sequel. Maybe make it a little darker. I like the summary, its chopped full of drama. So keep up the good work and i look forward to reading your newest stories.
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