| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-Ranger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY! CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE THIS ONE AND JUST BY LUCK ALSO. GREAT JOB AND KEEP IT UP!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 01:31 CST
Comment/Review:
cool
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 19:25 CST
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Oh...I like this story! Kagome, I feel your pain! Nice job you've been doing. The story is set up as it would be in the states, right? Not Japan? Because if it's Japan, where are the J-rock bands?? No L'Arc? X Japan? Dir en Grey? :D (Just look at my stories, they bleed J-Rock XD XD) Keep up the good job!!
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Title: OFF TOPIC!
Reviewed By: Ashie On: November 23, 2006 14:00 CST
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Hey I just want to say that your stories r great.This maybe Girl Next Door reviews but UPDATE JUST BY LUCK!Okay?Or I will be mad and,and.......sit here.....eat tamatoes......and....be angrey!!!!Big threat huh?Yeah....great job!Squee!G2G!Damn FBI is after me again!J/J!
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Reviewed By: InuYashaLuvKagome On: November 23, 2006 12:00 CST
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This story is getting very good!! Update soon!! P.S. Did u no u spell flu wrong
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Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is getting really good i cant wait for more update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything is great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: yeahsurewhateverrr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 03:31 CST
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i love just about everything. sentences can be a little more complex, but whatever floats your boat. you write it & review, deal? (: ooh, but you absolutely have to spell 'straight' correctly next time. i was practically keeling over in my chair because it wasn`t spelled right. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 01:14 CST
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btw, who ppl are f***ing weird. not tweak. the rest of you. (Sare: spoken like a true southern cali girl. BB: shut up. Sare: that too BB: SHUT UP!)random review
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 01:08 CST
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I like it. i can relate the confused thing. i hate being confused. ugh
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Title: Aye.
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 21:46 CST
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I just totally forgot what i was going to type. (Wynter sits thinking about random stuff for awhile.) Oh yeah keep up the great work on your story. Also the pictures you put on our notebook are fucking hilarious. Anyways I hope you have a happy thanksgiving with your disfunctional family. I know i won't, i don't think my brother will even be there.
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Reviewed By: Ashie On: November 22, 2006 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hint hint!I CAN'T write u an E-mail b/c I don't have an E-mail!This is the only way I can say stuff and u said it would be funny if I had a review fight with Wynter!I'm sorry that that's the only way I can talk to you without forgeting it the next day.I guess I won't write.Besides I didn't point the random stuff it toward the reviewers!That was between you and me so whatever!I guess I won't review but that doesn't mean I won't read it again.So keep writing,because I do like your storey but I didn't know it was a crime to talk to you oaky?Sue me.Ashie,I hope your stories go great okay?I'm sorry,I guess I'm talking to you agian.So here is my last words for the stories,both of them,good job and bye.I won't bug you agian!SUBJECT DROPPED!
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Title: Must kill Ashley
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 14:10 CST
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Tweak's reviewer don't mind kogasgurls/jam maybe, she just has a stick shoved up her ass to far, that it just happens to be cutting off the oxygen from her brain. Ashley i'm going to disembowel you then i will hang you be your intestine. And if you are still remotely alive( which you shouldn't be but anyways) I will rip out your liver and force feed it to you. ( Wynter looks around thinking) Other reviews please just ignore kogasgurls/jam maybe and me. Oh yeah please don't take us Seriously and call they authorities, it's just mindless fun. (I think)
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Title: I can spell Wynter(alas
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wynter
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Title: MUHAHAHA!WYNTER!(gosh dammit!Sp?)
Reviewed By: kogasgurls/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Wnyter!It is u that will suffer!May u be hurt and have alcohol and salt rubbed in your bloody wounds!Then you shall have every hair painfully picked out!Then have your eyelashes grabbed out and have your ears cut off!Then I will srap my nails onto a calk board!Then your fingers shall be sown together and ripprd back a part!Then I will make you listen to McFolley's constant bickering!MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! By:Ashie! By the way,all of u peoples just reading this for fun,I'm not THIS evil,I'm a lot worse!Ask my 1 cuz Tweak,and SmittyDragon!!!
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