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| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Title: This damn thing won't show up rite!BOO-HOO!
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RANDOM STUFF!!!!Squee!I luv random things!1.)If u lik rap well then u can burn in the 7 bloody layers of Hell(or Skool)!2.)If u lik rock then may the gituar b the death of u all
| Title: HAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My latest work!:By:Ashie!!!OXOX lik my 5 review 2nite!!!! I hate it when you look at me,I'm a mess why can't you see?Just wanna be on my own,I can make it all alone.Darkness falls,I've got my back,Watch your ace jack.So you say you're the King of Queens,The hott dog super sapreme?I've got a lesson,Memorize it, Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,Disorinated faces,A moon but no stars,Like the sun without a light,Or Hercules without his might.This is the world,The world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.So you're stuck up and snobby,playing pranks for all the wrong reasons.The football captin,best of the baseball team,your skills are great but you're too mean.Shoot a basket and it goes swish,tired of hearing your girlfriends bitch.So you play in games and on girls but do you know the lonely world?Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,disorinated faces,a moon but no stars,like the sun without a light,or Hercules without his might.This is the world,the world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.Don't bit off more than you can chew,you just moved here,you're fairly new,I knew your bark is worse than your bit,turn it off,blow out your endless light.Do you how much pain you caused?Things that can't be replaced,like a priceless potery,or real golden gates.Greed is what got you here,I 'm here to warn that if you don't shape up the end is near.Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,disorinated faces,a moon but no stars,like the sun without a light,or Hercules without his might.This is the world,the world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.
| Title: Random Shit!
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RANDOM STUFF!!!! Squee!I luv random things! 1.)If u lik rap well then u can burn in the 7 bloody layers of Hell(or Skool)! 2.)If u lik rock then may the gituar b the death of u all
| Title: MEOW
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work, Nicole. Nicole's cousin, you are her family so you are the one who's suppose to suffer. I will make sure Nicole will make you suffer. For I am all that is evil and you will bow down before me. Plus you're a Maldita puta. ( insert evil laughter here) Nicole do you want us to post Deathless here?
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you can upload soon.
| Title: *SOB*
Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: November 19, 2006 23:37 CST
Comment/Review:
pooor kagz.... but it was her fault in him finding out that makes her miserable tho, not him, she couldn't b mad at him when she is in love..... and inu course likes her back he just like kik becuz of her status, right? i will read on til the happy ending! bye ya!
| Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked this chap. please update amap(as much as possible, lol). btw, you dont happen to live in southern cali, do you? not much other places get all thanksgiving week off.
| Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so sad! poor kags! in love with inu and she can't tell him!!! you once said that kikyo was screwing a nerd to get high grades... inu is going to cath her right? and then he and kags can finally be happy yay!!! or at least i hope so... lol... =)
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 19, 2006 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finished ur fanfic today. it was pretty awesome. how old r u and did u write songs because if u did. that would have been awesome awesome. update soon!!!
| Title: I love it
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 19, 2006 14:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I got the same feelin. I don't like Kikyo either she's so cold and scary.
| Title: Exciting
Reviewed By: 6angel9 On: November 19, 2006 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good write. I can't wait to read what happens next. Update please. You are doing an awesome job
| Title: :D
Reviewed By: Sango 45 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ILoveYourStory!!UpdateSoonOrI'llDieO.O' (SpacebarIsBroked...heh-.-)
| Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: November 18, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic!!! i luv it good thing 2mrrw is sunday cuz i can't wait 2 read the next ch. all the way til the end!! Great job, but one thing is ayame, sango, mir, kouga, and everyone else gonna find out? if its part of the plot don't tell me! i wanna find out anyway, yea fantastic story!
| Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 11:58 CST
Comment/Review:
update! please!
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!but can the update be longer?
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